Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

This is a gem, Bill! I have
quarts and quarts full of
cascading praise for the
clever quartz, uh, granite, lol!
Really great humor. My very
best wishes for the contest.
Have a grand poetry/writing
week. ~

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

Thanks, Regina.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem for the contest.
-A good topic and effective word play and puns!
-I enjoy a good sense of humor.
-Maybe your wish was a win in the contest.
-Good luck!!!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023

Thanks, Pam

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Jan-2023

You are welcome. I voted for your poem, too.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A play on words here and I live on a rock for part of my year and always feel its firm foundation as a solid place to make memories, a fine write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Lol, hello there my friend. Well thank you, that gave me a little chuckle. Heh-heh
This is a rock solid entry. It's really cute humor. Good luck to you.

-Kerry.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023

Thank you, Kerry

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 15-Jan-2023

welcome

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

I love this sort of humour. A little nerdy and geeky just like me. Cheeky last word but it all works very well together. A great composition, I enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023

Thank you, Jacqueline.

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

Oh my goodness. There should be a laughing meter in the Star selection. I would have hit the button. Reminds me of the show, "Make Me Laugh" of a few years ago. I believe Howie Mandel got his start on that show. Great entry.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you, Kaiku

reply by Kaiku on 13-Jan-2023

You bet

reply by Kaiku on 13-Jan-2023

yep

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I love your play on words here. Your last line "granite" is clever and creative. Excellent 2-4-2 form that is fun to read and brings a smile to the reader's face. This is an excellent entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thanks so much for the great review.

Comment from Michele Harber

Exceptional

I love puns, and to use such a good one, in only eight syllables, is quite the feat! Thank you for making me smile, and I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thank you, Michelle, for the great review.

reply by Michele Harber on 13-Jan-2023

My pleasure!

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Man I wish I had a six. (sucks when people say that)
I actually spit my coffee out when I read this! Damn funny.

This will get my vote, how could it not?

Very funny and well thought out. I have a feeling I know the author on this one, I recognize the wit. Maybe starts with a T? We shall see! Great work!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thanks, Douglas

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Heh heh, I just love this story, I love the sense of humour that gave birth to this 2/4/2 contest entry, I haven't seen anything as cute as this for quite sometime, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thanks, Roy

reply by royowen on 13-Jan-2023

Most welcome