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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "God's Most Perfect Pain ofRequet"
My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from thoughtgame2
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All the words I have just read took my breath away. And the way they were written made me gasp for air. You are truly a remarkable story teller .No pun intended. I have never really felt words wrap around me the ways yours have and I also adore Mrs close pictures. I use them a lot. Keep up the great work doctor ricky...and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
    Thanks for your time and Review.
    Have a blessed day.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. You have a special way of saying things that put things into an interesting perspective that requires we think. That's a good thing. People don't spend enough time thinking today.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
    As you watch in reviews.
    As I present more in the future
    You will notice that if you don't think and pay attention?
    Well then you will be stifled in the very end.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from papa55mike
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I read this morning how God puts us in the wilderness of pain to do a wonderful work inside our hearts. But nobody wants the wilderness. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
    Thank you Michael and let's keep the torch burning for Fanstory somebody's got to do it!
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
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Very well worked up and presented for the request for life to be passed onto others on the organ list saving others in dire need so man go unheard . Let you voice be hear all over the world in need of hope.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
    Well thanks!
    And, finally somebody understands why I'm writing!
    Thanks and watches I flood the market with hundreds upon hundreds of beautiful books!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching to the Choir Here At Fanstory"