Comment from Regina Elliott

Exceptional

Hello dear friend! My gosh,
so many good memories
inspired by your wondrous
nostalgic 3 line poem! In the
early 1960's we danced the
Hokey Pokey and the
Bunny Hop, the Twist on
Long Island through the
school year and in the
Summer recreation program.
Dear Debi, I hope you have
a blessed and creative
Sunday. I love the Christmas
card you sent with your
beautiful family photo.
All the best to you & yours!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

.Regina, as always, you are so sweet. it seems everyone has their favorite memories with this dance. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. And also for your gift of six stars!
You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
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Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Loved this amusing three line poem and the intended pun of
you'll turn yourself around
The hokey pikey was up there with the nexican hat dance or the chicken dance for a bit of fun. Good luck in the contest Debi. Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Thanks so much Valda, it was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's story memories about it.

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Nothing greater than a fun read. I love the poem that is very humorous and funny. The artwork was very appropriate for the writing. The colors were so bright, they woke me fully. Everything worked well. Great job.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Thanks so much Amahra, it was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's story memories about it.

reply by amahra on 16-Jan-2023

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I didn't know it is so addictive because it's exercise and make you felt good. I wish I can be addicted to it. I do however like many outdoor exercises.

Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Thanks so much Jasmine. it was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's story memories about it.

Comment from Jennifer Keeley

Excellent

This is perfect: simple, sweet, and some humor- that's what it's all about! Very creative Debi. It's always nice when a writer can share a poem in a way that grabs the attention of the reader. This was a nice read.
Enjoy your day!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Hi Jenn! Thanks so much. It was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's story & memories about it.

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

that is so very cute! The picture is cute, too. I certainly hope that we can turn ourselves around! Best of luck in the contest. Evi

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Hi Evi, Thanks so much. it was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's stories & memories about it.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Debi,
This short poem is a humorous lake on a serious subject. It would be great if addiction could be that easily cured.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck with the contest.
Joan

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Hi Joan, Thanks so much. it was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's stories & memories about it.

reply by dragonpoet on 16-Jan-2023

My pleasure, Debi.
Joan

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

A very interesting picture! I like it. Good choice.

You are right. It is easy to fall into addiction but difficult to get rid of it. Typical life challenges include any sports once addicted, it seems it is there forever.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Thanks so much. it was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's stories & memories about it.

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

Cute and funny. I can never understand why we need to write 150 characters to praise a good work. So, I am being honest and filling in space. You hit the prompt quite well as you always do!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Thanks so much. it was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's stories & memories about it.

Comment from godlucifer

Excellent

fun format. creativity is within fiction. the meaning and expression of the poem was well imagine. your poem was well received and well written. thanks for the read.

truly
godlucifer

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023

Thanks so much. it was a fun one to do and I love hearing everyone's stories & memories about it.