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Earth Day Coming

Death of Corruption

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Comment from Ricky1024
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"Earth Day Coming" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
    Thank you much
Comment from Mary Shifman
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Well, I don't know how well this plan would work, but it sounds good. I know we sure need to do something because I have a terrible feeling that soon, Mother Earth will have had enough of our selfishness and abuse and let us have it with "both barrels" as the saying goes. A lot of things that started out as science fiction is now science fact. So why not this?

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023
    Let's make it happen
Comment from papa55mike
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There is something coming soon that will change mankind forever. Your story is a very plausible possibility. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Many thanks...John
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
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The aim of the two groups is one which most would support. Corruption is rife in virtually all governments, West and East. The concept of 'wage slaves' already exists. More and more people are disillusioned with their jobs and lives. I like the idea that science fiction could be a guide to change:

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the review...John