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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from Lulube
Exceptional
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Truly a heartfelt poem. Filled with love, sorrow, gladness and sadness. However you need to come to the pain to lessen it, is what counts. All the trauma in such a short time is enough to want to end your life that's filled with the loss of your loves, maybe even a bit of envy and bitterness mixed in with sorrow make it impossible to want to live. But time can heal the heart but your mind will never forget, you need to find the answer for the solution to lessen the pain. I know easier said than done. But "I think you have worked hard on coping and now it's time to feel free.

lulube

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Thanks my dear friend.
    I've myself from all that many many years ago.
    A good writer can write it.
    A great writer can present it.
    But the greatest writer can make you believe it!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Lulube on 01-Feb-2023
    who better to have than ourselves

    lulube
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this tribute with us about your lovely wife Carolyn. I can tell she was a special person and the love of your life. I know you will reunite with her in Heaven on day.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Thanks for your wonderful comments especially for Carolyn.
    Because she suffered so, not just while we were married 20 years.
    But her first marriage and then also when she was being raised by her mother.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from papa55mike
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There is a day coming when we will be reunited with our family and we become whole again. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    I appreciate your time and review Mike and have a blessed day!
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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I wonder how you can achieve all you're doing with this burden on your shoulders for so long. I think writing about your loss makes you feel better and the unwavering faith in our lord makes you stronger.
Blessings to you, Ricky

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
    Your answer.
    "Each and Every Day!"
    By Doctor Ricky 1024


    I know on April 14th it will be 20 years.
    20 years I've been writing.
    20 years of grieving.
    20 years of grieving the loss of my wife and son.
    And, somehow journaling seems to rebuild me.
    Yes, from each and every word.
    Yes, from each and every poem.
    I've written hundreds of thousands.
    Along with over 800 books.
    ...
    I explained it as a candle that's turned into a raging forest fire
    Yes that I can't even control.
    I'm compelled from a powerful connection above
    Ignited first from the loss of my son.
    And, I just go with It.
    Burn, burn, with it.
    As I learn.
    To learn.
    To learn with it.
    Each and Every Day!"

    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024