You are the Sunshine
a message of love30 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a great poem and very deserving of the win.
I missed this because of all that was going on in
my life. Love is like sunshine you know. We can't get enough of it unless we get burned. Then enough is enough. Well done, Janet. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This is a great poem and very deserving of the win.
I missed this because of all that was going on in
my life. Love is like sunshine you know. We can't get enough of it unless we get burned. Then enough is enough. Well done, Janet. Nancy:)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you Nancy for this stellar review and six stars. Hope things are settling down for you. You have certainly had more than your share of life?s tragedies. MaySpring bring brighter days your way
Blessings my friend
Janet
Comment from royowen
I think I know the way you think, and whom you have in mind when you wrote this fabulous poem. All creation is a gigantic metaphor that should remind us of this mighty God of the universe. This is beautifully written Janet, congratulations, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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I think I know the way you think, and whom you have in mind when you wrote this fabulous poem. All creation is a gigantic metaphor that should remind us of this mighty God of the universe. This is beautifully written Janet, congratulations, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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You know me so well dear Roy. Thank you for the kind review.
Blessings
Janet
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Thank you Janet
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Oh, this is lovely. I can see why it won first place - CONGRATULATIONS!
This is such a delicate and loving poem. The use of nature and their descriptions are captivating and very effective in making this piece come to life. I would be so honoured and feel deep love if my husband wrote this in a love poem to me. Alas, he doesn't read poetry never mind write it. Thank you so much for sharing and enjoy the six shower.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Oh, this is lovely. I can see why it won first place - CONGRATULATIONS!
This is such a delicate and loving poem. The use of nature and their descriptions are captivating and very effective in making this piece come to life. I would be so honoured and feel deep love if my husband wrote this in a love poem to me. Alas, he doesn't read poetry never mind write it. Thank you so much for sharing and enjoy the six shower.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the stellar review and the spectacular six shower.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from ESOSTINE
Hmm, very nice. I could sense the natural flow of those sweet words that lubricate the wheels of love. Well done, dear. A lot conveyed in just few lines. Please keep them coming. Will love to read more of your works.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Hmm, very nice. I could sense the natural flow of those sweet words that lubricate the wheels of love. Well done, dear. A lot conveyed in just few lines. Please keep them coming. Will love to read more of your works.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gloria ....
Congratulations on your contest win, Janet. This is a most serene two stanza poetic.
The love evident is calm and clear as a mountain lake.
Thank you for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Congratulations on your contest win, Janet. This is a most serene two stanza poetic.
The love evident is calm and clear as a mountain lake.
Thank you for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Gloria and thank you for the lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful two stanza poem of love, where you equate the beauty of the effects of the sun and the moon with the loveliness of your lover. Your choice of artwork pairs perfectly with your words. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is a beautiful two stanza poem of love, where you equate the beauty of the effects of the sun and the moon with the loveliness of your lover. Your choice of artwork pairs perfectly with your words. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review. I appreciate your kind words.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet two stanza poem you penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Best wishes in the contest, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This is a very sweet two stanza poem you penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Best wishes in the contest, Teri
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Teri for the lovely review. I appreciate your kind words.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A poem which may be read from different angles! It uses the power of nature and the changing light throughout the day, to express human love but at the same time touches on the love and protection of the Divine.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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A poem which may be read from different angles! It uses the power of nature and the changing light throughout the day, to express human love but at the same time touches on the love and protection of the Divine.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Sarah for the lovely review. I appreciate your kind words and understanding of the message.
Blessings
Janet
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I enjoyed reading your poem!
Comment from nomi338
Very nice. A tribute to one who is loved, appreciated and revered. One of the gifts I am most grateful for is the ability to put my thoughts and feelings down in words or the ability to vocalize how I feel in a way that is accepted. Those of us who have this gift are blessed in ways that many who do not have it, are not blessed.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Very nice. A tribute to one who is loved, appreciated and revered. One of the gifts I am most grateful for is the ability to put my thoughts and feelings down in words or the ability to vocalize how I feel in a way that is accepted. Those of us who have this gift are blessed in ways that many who do not have it, are not blessed.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you nomi for the lovely review. I appreciate your kind words and you are so right, we are most fortunate and gifted from above to be able to express our thoughts and feelings.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jim Wile
This was a beautiful poem, impeccably written in perfect abab rhyme scheme and iambic pentameter. That's a trait that many poets lack--the ability to maintain perfect meter and unforced rhyming. Very well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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This was a beautiful poem, impeccably written in perfect abab rhyme scheme and iambic pentameter. That's a trait that many poets lack--the ability to maintain perfect meter and unforced rhyming. Very well done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
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Thank you Jim for the lovely review. I greatly appreciate your kind words.
Blessings
Janet
