One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a nice modern haiku with a traditional subject. This time of year, the more poems with spring imagery, the better, ha ha. We as readers would love to see those tangled cherry blossoms one more time, as perhaps the poet mentioned in line one also is reflecting back.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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This is a nice modern haiku with a traditional subject. This time of year, the more poems with spring imagery, the better, ha ha. We as readers would love to see those tangled cherry blossoms one more time, as perhaps the poet mentioned in line one also is reflecting back.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, excellent review, and kind words.
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Comment from Karyn2
I enjoyed the feel and tone of this Haiku Gypsy. I can imagine I am there with the warm breeze on my face and perfumed scents surrounding while filling my mind with poetry. I'm sure the poet is imagining the last Haiku they dreamed of and letting the words linger around them in the moment.
I sure hope we never see the last of your Haiku's Gypsy!
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I enjoyed the feel and tone of this Haiku Gypsy. I can imagine I am there with the warm breeze on my face and perfumed scents surrounding while filling my mind with poetry. I'm sure the poet is imagining the last Haiku they dreamed of and letting the words linger around them in the moment.
I sure hope we never see the last of your Haiku's Gypsy!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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No, I don't plan to stop anytime soon.
Thank you very much for your time, excellent review, and kind words.
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful images and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written haiku with effective nature imagery
describing the spring breeze and cherry blossoms.
-I also like the idea in the first line.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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-Beautiful images and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written haiku with effective nature imagery
describing the spring breeze and cherry blossoms.
-I also like the idea in the first line.
-Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, excellent review, and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful haiku and a fantastic set of dual pictures, Gypsy. I really enjoyed your words because they were so meaningful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
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What a beautiful haiku and a fantastic set of dual pictures, Gypsy. I really enjoyed your words because they were so meaningful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, excellent review, and kind words.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Thank you for explaining the forms of Haiku poetry. This type of poem does not rhyme, that's why it is so fun to write. Like the words in this poem, cherry blossoms are Washington D.C.'s beauty, too.
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Thank you for explaining the forms of Haiku poetry. This type of poem does not rhyme, that's why it is so fun to write. Like the words in this poem, cherry blossoms are Washington D.C.'s beauty, too.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, excellent review, and kind words.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
The poet may be no more, but his or her words will last forever and will forever have an impact on those who read. Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. You are so talented, I am envious.
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The poet may be no more, but his or her words will last forever and will forever have an impact on those who read. Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. You are so talented, I am envious.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Every body have their own unique talent. I can't write stories the way you do. You are an excellent writer.
Thank you very much for your time, excellent review, and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Thank you very much for your time, excellent review, and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad that you are promoting your poems more! I like the feel of this haiku. Perhaps the poet is no more but the writing of the last haiku is revived with spring and the new life of the cherry blossoms.
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I'm so glad that you are promoting your poems more! I like the feel of this haiku. Perhaps the poet is no more but the writing of the last haiku is revived with spring and the new life of the cherry blossoms.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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I got 100 fanstory dollars for ending in 4th place. I already have two awards so I don't need anyone. It's nice to have money (*÷*)
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Love you. Marival ❤️
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I can picture you sitting under the cherry tree as you pen this (and other) haikus, dappled sunlight illuminating your words and warming your spirit. Your poem created strong visual impacts of scene. Kate xx
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I can picture you sitting under the cherry tree as you pen this (and other) haikus, dappled sunlight illuminating your words and warming your spirit. Your poem created strong visual impacts of scene. Kate xx
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, excellent review, and kind words.
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is beautiful poem about poem's last Haiku and the cherry blossoms. The presentation is very good as usual. I have one question: why are you using 5/7/7=19 syallbles?
Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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This is beautiful poem about poem's last Haiku and the cherry blossoms. The presentation is very good as usual. I have one question: why are you using 5/7/7=19 syallbles?
Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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I used 19 syllables because katauta has a 5/7/7 syllables count. It's a katauta about a last haiku.
Rules
A katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/7.
sedoka rules source
Thank you very much for your time, kind words, and excellent review.
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Comment from royowen
As always you have a great presentation here Gypsy, you are a very skilled poet, plus you are a technical wonder with presentation and Poem well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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As always you have a great presentation here Gypsy, you are a very skilled poet, plus you are a technical wonder with presentation and Poem well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind words, and excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
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Blessings
