Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Making Lemonade"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from damommy
Your mother was a wise lady, and I love how she explained that. Some lemons can be advantageous, but bad ones should be watched out for. You're right. Not all lemons are bad.
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Your mother was a wise lady, and I love how she explained that. Some lemons can be advantageous, but bad ones should be watched out for. You're right. Not all lemons are bad.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Yvonne, I thank you so very much! You are so sweet that you could sweeten the sourest lemonade. I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my poem.
Much appreciated my dear friend!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
My Mother made lemon curd often with lemons and her recipe is something I have kept as it is very special and I always enjoy the results. There are some bitter lemons in life and we should recognise them and move on, a poignant write Debi, love Dolly x
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My Mother made lemon curd often with lemons and her recipe is something I have kept as it is very special and I always enjoy the results. There are some bitter lemons in life and we should recognise them and move on, a poignant write Debi, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Dolly, I thank you so very much! You are so sweet that you could sweeten the sourest lemonade. I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my poem.
Much appreciated my dear friend!
Comment from Carol Clark2
I like the way you wove such common sense and good advice into your poem. Thanks for sharing your mother's wisdom. I especially like these lines: 'Do what you must do to keep the positive in life
Don't take the personality of lemons that cause strife.'
Blessings. Carol
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I like the way you wove such common sense and good advice into your poem. Thanks for sharing your mother's wisdom. I especially like these lines: 'Do what you must do to keep the positive in life
Don't take the personality of lemons that cause strife.'
Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Hi Carol, as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. And also for your gift of six stars!
You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend! And you my friend are certainly no lemon! Lol!
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Thanks, my sweet friend. I enjoyed your poem immensely.
Comment from Sally Law
A wonderful cheery poem for the new year. Yep, life is sweeter and better with sweet lemons! No sour pusses allowed! Love my sweet FanStory friends and the visionaries all around me. God is good to surround me with great friends like you, Debi! Thanks for the refreshing write and the encouraging words!
Sending along my very best as always,
Sal XOs
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A wonderful cheery poem for the new year. Yep, life is sweeter and better with sweet lemons! No sour pusses allowed! Love my sweet FanStory friends and the visionaries all around me. God is good to surround me with great friends like you, Debi! Thanks for the refreshing write and the encouraging words!
Sending along my very best as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Sally,, you are so sweet. And your .fun and adorable way of phrasing things always make me smile. Thank you for your lovely words and the six stars, are special people!
You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
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Most welcome, dear one. My pleasure as always. Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, you are correct. Just like one bad apple doesn't spoil the whole bunch, one bitter lemon doesn't ruin the whole bunch. We need to spit out it and not be foolish to try that one again.
Your poem reads and flows well and your message is clear.
I especially liked:
Do what you must do, to keep the positive in life
Don't take the personality, of lemons that cause strife
(It just so much more fun, and tastier, to be a banana or a pineapple, or a delicious fruit salad. Lol. D, can't you see me walking around with the top of a pineapple on my head?)
A fun poem. Your mother was a very wise woman. Well done. Xo. O
p.s. Can we still afford to but lemons? I haven't checked the price lately. When they hit $1 for One, I started to buy limes.
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Hi Debi, you are correct. Just like one bad apple doesn't spoil the whole bunch, one bitter lemon doesn't ruin the whole bunch. We need to spit out it and not be foolish to try that one again.
Your poem reads and flows well and your message is clear.
I especially liked:
Do what you must do, to keep the positive in life
Don't take the personality, of lemons that cause strife
(It just so much more fun, and tastier, to be a banana or a pineapple, or a delicious fruit salad. Lol. D, can't you see me walking around with the top of a pineapple on my head?)
A fun poem. Your mother was a very wise woman. Well done. Xo. O
p.s. Can we still afford to but lemons? I haven't checked the price lately. When they hit $1 for One, I started to buy limes.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Margaret, you are sweet. And your friendship is everything to me . Thanks for the kind review, lovely words and for your gift of six stars!
You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Gracie619
What a wonderfully flowing poem that left me feeling warm and cozy inside. I like how it gave me lots to think about this evening. It stayed with me even while I was standing in the kitchen doing dishes. Great job!
I wish you all the best in life! Keep writing and doing all that you do.
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What a wonderfully flowing poem that left me feeling warm and cozy inside. I like how it gave me lots to think about this evening. It stayed with me even while I was standing in the kitchen doing dishes. Great job!
I wish you all the best in life! Keep writing and doing all that you do.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Thank you Gracie, so very much I appreciate your very sweet review and such kind words Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an AWESOME job with your poem, Debi. I liked how you
took a phrase most know and expanded it to tell of how some
people abuse their 'power.' Your lines flowed smoothly with great
rhymes. Your message was clear in a way that others could learn
from rather than just accusing or abusing like some do--no, not
you. Yes, we all have had, and will have our share of lemons in
life. The meaning of a person's personality is how s/he deals with
those. Do they learn from them or turn on others because they don't
believe they deserved those lemons. Words can be like soured
lemons thrown out to hurt others on purpose. Does that make the
person better than others? S/he tends to believe it does. If I feel
bad (lemons), then I'm gonna make everyone feel worse. I liked the
way you brought your faith into your poem. I agree--that's the time
to take stock of your life and faith as God will guide you. A lemon
when handled tactfully will hopefully teach rather than cause pain.
Your picture was a perfect accompaniment to your poem.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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You did an AWESOME job with your poem, Debi. I liked how you
took a phrase most know and expanded it to tell of how some
people abuse their 'power.' Your lines flowed smoothly with great
rhymes. Your message was clear in a way that others could learn
from rather than just accusing or abusing like some do--no, not
you. Yes, we all have had, and will have our share of lemons in
life. The meaning of a person's personality is how s/he deals with
those. Do they learn from them or turn on others because they don't
believe they deserved those lemons. Words can be like soured
lemons thrown out to hurt others on purpose. Does that make the
person better than others? S/he tends to believe it does. If I feel
bad (lemons), then I'm gonna make everyone feel worse. I liked the
way you brought your faith into your poem. I agree--that's the time
to take stock of your life and faith as God will guide you. A lemon
when handled tactfully will hopefully teach rather than cause pain.
Your picture was a perfect accompaniment to your poem.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Jan, I thank you for very much for. your very sweet review and comment,,,, .
I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
An interesting poem. The sentiment is a common idiom. The flow is good. The rhymes are unforced. The narrative stays on point.
Thanks for sharing a good read.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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An interesting poem. The sentiment is a common idiom. The flow is good. The rhymes are unforced. The narrative stays on point.
Thanks for sharing a good read.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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I thank you so very much! I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my poem.
Much appreciated my dear friend!
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You are welcome.
Comment from jmdg1954
They say if life hands you lemons, then you make lemonade...
You said it well in your poetic post with a good last line about the booze. Nice touch.
Cheers. John
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They say if life hands you lemons, then you make lemonade...
You said it well in your poetic post with a good last line about the booze. Nice touch.
Cheers. John
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
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Thank you for you kind review and comments for my poem.
sure appreciate it my friend
Comment from royowen
There's one thing about lemons, they are very sour it's true, but they are certainly versatile, if one sprinkles them on fish, they add much flavour, typified we squeeze them onto pancakes they flatter, if we make drink, it is very refreshing, if we eat them raw, they set the teeth on edge, this is beautifully wrutten Debi, blessings Roy
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There's one thing about lemons, they are very sour it's true, but they are certainly versatile, if one sprinkles them on fish, they add much flavour, typified we squeeze them onto pancakes they flatter, if we make drink, it is very refreshing, if we eat them raw, they set the teeth on edge, this is beautifully wrutten Debi, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Roy, I thank you so very much! You are so sweet that you could sweeten the sourest lemonade. I can't thank you enough for your kind comments regarding my poem.
Much appreciated my dear friend!
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Well done Debi
