Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I am slightly familiar with the acrostic poem (I don't write poetry). You did a wonderful writing here with Early Eagle.
Your description of the eagle and its power was outstanding.

Thanks for sharing. John

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

John, I appreciate your validation!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great image and nice presentation.
-I like the font choice for the beginning letters.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-I like the opening two lines that set the tone and mood.
-Followed by 'regal' is a good choice because it describes
the wonderful presence of this creature.
-I like the line about the "gods in the sky"
and the "order as designed."
-A good concluding line, as well.
-One small thing: did you mean yearning?

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

Smiles back, I guess I need to schedule the appointment with the eye doctor .

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Jan-2023

😊😊You are very welcome for the review. Where did you get the picture?

reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

A friend who writes for a nonprofit organization, sadly it came in an attachment with out the artist credits.

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Jan-2023

Thanks for sharing. It was a beautiful image.

Comment from Rebecca Roberts1

Excellent

Very nicely done.
Your words flowed well with one another. I especially liked the line, "gods of the sky smiled down in kind liking the order as designed". Fits well with the photo.
Great job.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

Thanks

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Excellent

This is a very demanding form to tax the brain! The photo complements the poem very well! Did you mean 'yearing' or yearning'? I think the last line is particularly well put. This is nature at work!

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

Thanks yes corrected.

reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 08-Jan-2023

Welcome!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I felt this would be a good challenge for the brightest stars, and it seems your shining is as a sunrise. ....................................................................................

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

I appreciate that Tom, have a great Sunday.