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Lightning strikes

one of those moments

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This story, Lightning Strikes, zeroes in on one of those life moments when we find out who we are. Are we a coward, or one who rises to the occasion and does what is needed?

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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This was an excellent flash fiction piece! I am glad that the old man was there to help Wes make the right decision. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from JT traveller
Good
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So many questions. Was Wes part of your family? Who was the old man. I like the prose but, for me, it leaves too many open ends. Admittedly, the restrictions on the word count make it difficult. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the highest compliment. To have so many questions after 100 words. It means you were invested. Thank you
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Thank you for the highest compliment. To have so many questions after 100 words. It means you were invested. Thank you
reply by JT traveller on 08-Jan-2023
    I certainly was. Thankyou.