Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It's very dramatic. I'm enjoying reading.

The breathing has slowed the mucus and phlegm are winning the battle to msey very end. (msey?)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023

Thanks Barbara I just caught that and corrected it.
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Comment from JT traveller

Poor

Very little to say. You are still alive and conscious enough to write. Are you seeking sympathy? RSV and Covid I believe most of the world has been contaminated with.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023

The object of this book if you read the first chapter with the prologue is to write something amazing while the disease is actually in the poet and writer am i seeking sympathy no.
What most people don't know here is I've been tested clear now since the third.
What I don't understand is why you gave this a poor review when everybody else gave it five and six stars?
As far as I know there wasn't any grammar problems in the content was definitely Worthy.
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Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Come in get rid if Grace seen her packing! You are stronger than n she is boot he out of your houses, don't let her get the best of you or the rest of you. Rise up I say and be heard. We pray for you each and every day to bripung you back yomus.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023

I'm afraid to say that my days are counting down now.
I'm going to be hitting the old rusty trail right up to heaven.
I hope they got an opening for a good Writer there?
Thank,
Sick Doctor Ricky

reply by country ranch writer on 07-Jan-2023

Hugs my prayers and others are going others here.