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Poems of Love and Spirit

Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "The Strength of Faith"
This book is about love, God's Love most of all.

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Comment from amahra
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"Faith is the substance of things hoped for and the evidence of things not seen." Thank you for this well-worded poem of faith. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear Amahra, Thank you so much for your rating and review, recognising the key place faith plays in our lives. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Faith Williams
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The line, 'Faith is not measured by what you see,' stood out to me because so often we look with our eyes and not with our hearts.

The other line that stood out to me was, 'Faith knows not what the future holds, but trusts as God that future unfolds.' I think as humans we think that we need to understand everything that is happening in us, our lives, the world, but God only ever asks for our trust. We think that because we don't understand, we cannot trust.

Thank you for sharing your lovely and thought-provoking poem. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear Faith, Thank you for your rating and review. With the understanding you have of the concept of faith, you are aptly named! Thank you for your insight. Have a wonderful year, no matter what it may bring.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a well written poetic call to discipline and preaching. It shows what faith is and does.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest
Joan

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear Joan, Thank you so much for your rating and insightful review. I really appreciate you comments. God bless!
reply by dragonpoet on 07-Jan-2023
    You are most kindly welcome.
    Joan
Comment from Heather Knight
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Hello,
This is a beautifully rhyming poem and I think it's the first I've read by you.
You are right when you say faith is a great comfort.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear Heather, Thank you so much for your rating and kind comments in your review. I hope you get to read and enjoy some of my other poems, as I love to write about faith.
Comment from Karyn2
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This is a really lovely poem! Your faith is so deeply evident in every line and it is clear you have a close walk with God. Your rhymes are effortless and rhythm is strong. Your thoughts flow clearly and succinctly offering a really satisfying and uplifting ending. Best wishes to you on this fine entry.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear Karyn, Thank you so much for your kind and inspiring comments in your review--and thank you, too, for the rating you gave it.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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Exceptional piece of spiritual poetry, deserves 6-stars!!! It's a sound lesson on faith and it exudes an emotionally charged reading moment.
Great poem!!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear Mario, Thank you so much for your inspiring comments and for your rating. It means a lot to me.
reply by Mario PIERRE on 07-Jan-2023
    You are most welcome...
reply by Mario PIERRE on 07-Jan-2023
    You are most welcome, you created a wonderful piece of poetry
Comment from JT traveller
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Your faith is strong. I appreciate the intensity of your word choice as it makes for compelling reading. "Clarion sound", great word choice. Congratulations on your poem and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear Jacqueline, Thank you so much for your review and rating. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and wish you a wonderful weekend--hopefully, not too cold!
reply by JT traveller on 07-Jan-2023
    Haha. Thankyou. Not where we currently are.
Comment from Regina Elliott
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This beauty of a godly poem
of faith has been so well
penned with such grace.
I sincerely hope you win this
competition. May you have a
very creative weekend and
many blessings to you. ~

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear Regina, Thank you so much for your encouraging review and kind wishes. God bless you with a wonderful weekend!
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Faith is something I struggle with, though not as much throughout the years. I tell people I have a real with God because we have our fights and I storm out and do the silent treatment for awhile. It's definitely a learning experience with faith. Great job.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Thank you so much for your review and rating. Someone once told me something that has stuck with me: Faith comes. It grows by hearing the Word of God. A frank, honest relationship with God will always win out in the end. You'll be surprised how it seems to sneak up on you just when you need it!
Comment from John Ciarmello
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This is an excellent entry for the contest. A strong faith in God is all anyone could ask for, along with the diligence to do things right and stay on course. An enjoyable read. Best JohnC

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
    Dear John, Thank you so much for your encouraging review and rating. I couldn't agree more with your sentiments.