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Comment from Mark Schardine
We can read so much into this poem!
How did the relationship begin, continue, and end? Did only two people know? Are the references to the weather literal or metaphorical? We can easily imagine numerous scenarios, because you kick-start our imaginations.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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We can read so much into this poem!
How did the relationship begin, continue, and end? Did only two people know? Are the references to the weather literal or metaphorical? We can easily imagine numerous scenarios, because you kick-start our imaginations.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2023
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Mark,
Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your words and image are so gorgeous. The Grand Canyon is beyond its beauty. When you fly in a plane and look down at this rocky land, it looks like a person would like to vacation there.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Your words and image are so gorgeous. The Grand Canyon is beyond its beauty. When you fly in a plane and look down at this rocky land, it looks like a person would like to vacation there.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Rosemarie
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is a really nice Tanka. It reminds me of my trip to the Grand Canyon years ago.
Nice images.
Great metaphor at the end.
God luck with your book.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Gypsy,
This is a really nice Tanka. It reminds me of my trip to the Grand Canyon years ago.
Nice images.
Great metaphor at the end.
God luck with your book.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Cindy
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
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You?re welcome, Gypsy.
Hugs,
Cindy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can relate to this poem as I did a lot of travelling with someone who I was once very close to, but I just knew the end was nigh, sad but inevitable, a fine write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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I can relate to this poem as I did a lot of travelling with someone who I was once very close to, but I just knew the end was nigh, sad but inevitable, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Dolly,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- excellent picture presentation of the Grand Canyon- beautiful place- usually- this vacation being the exception? - impossible love May have had something to do with it-,ancient streams cut stone - nice- Good Job-AP
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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I like your Tanka poem- excellent picture presentation of the Grand Canyon- beautiful place- usually- this vacation being the exception? - impossible love May have had something to do with it-,ancient streams cut stone - nice- Good Job-AP
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The picture and the poem complement each other. The text is carefully written and carries strong emotions. The form seems simple but the ideas are often complex.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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The picture and the poem complement each other. The text is carefully written and carries strong emotions. The form seems simple but the ideas are often complex.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Gypsy. I enjoy reading your Tankas and I'm glad you have created a book to tuck them away and hopefully publish them one day. I went to the Grand Canyon a few years ago and it is so amazing and beautiful from the view at the top, but you have given us a new perspective. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Hello Gypsy. I enjoy reading your Tankas and I'm glad you have created a book to tuck them away and hopefully publish them one day. I went to the Grand Canyon a few years ago and it is so amazing and beautiful from the view at the top, but you have given us a new perspective. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Melissa,
Thank you very for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. Right now i don't have the time to publish my books because I take care of my grandson but I will in the future. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs!
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed the metaphors. I can see the how the deep gorges can relate to deep cuts within our souls. Once again, you created a perfect package filled with emotion. Wonderful job. I don't have any sixes left, sorry.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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I enjoyed the metaphors. I can see the how the deep gorges can relate to deep cuts within our souls. Once again, you created a perfect package filled with emotion. Wonderful job. I don't have any sixes left, sorry.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Barbara,
Thank you very for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs!
Gypsy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Brilliant use of metaphors. The turbulance of the winds and water in the gorge are used to describe both the physical and emotional end of a relationship.
Perfect.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Brilliant use of metaphors. The turbulance of the winds and water in the gorge are used to describe both the physical and emotional end of a relationship.
Perfect.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Mary,
Thank you very for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs!
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
What an interesting tanka, Gypsy. I really liked the dual pictures. Your words showed the beauty of nature. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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What an interesting tanka, Gypsy. I really liked the dual pictures. Your words showed the beauty of nature. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Aryr
Thank you very for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be. Hugs!
Gypsy