One Thousand Cranes
Viewing comments for Chapter 204 "A Thousand Nights"Gypsy's Favorites
23 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
Lovely. I like the verse :"waiting in our meeting place knowing you won't come". I think this deeply felt human experience is described here so well. I like the contrast it forms w nature...
And the title is so intriguing
Nice work Gypsy.
Xoxo
Judith
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
  |
Lovely. I like the verse :"waiting in our meeting place knowing you won't come". I think this deeply felt human experience is described here so well. I like the contrast it forms w nature...
And the title is so intriguing
Nice work Gypsy.
Xoxo
Judith
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
-
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This tanka seems to be a poem of mourning for a loved one who has died or a break up that hasn't let you move on yet. The love is as extinct now as the the last spix macaw. I like how the print matches the color of the bird and is a metaphor for the sadness in the poem
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
|
Hi MariVal,
This tanka seems to be a poem of mourning for a loved one who has died or a break up that hasn't let you move on yet. The love is as extinct now as the the last spix macaw. I like how the print matches the color of the bird and is a metaphor for the sadness in the poem
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
-
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
-
You are very welcome on all accounts,
MariVal.
Joan
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy A nicely worded Tanka Rather sad and a longing never to be met
Great images and colour choice compliments words
Good luck in the contest
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
|
Hi Gypsy A nicely worded Tanka Rather sad and a longing never to be met
Great images and colour choice compliments words
Good luck in the contest
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
-
Cheers, Chris, it's good to hear from you.
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, Gypsy, this was amazing. I haven't been giving six star in days, except maybe one, saving them for the best - and this certainly is.
It is priceless, I loved every word, I had tears in my eyes reading about bleeding hearts. This was a Tanka at its best. Great artwork.
I missed your writing, Gypsy. But I haven't been on the sight much.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
 |
Oh, Gypsy, this was amazing. I haven't been giving six star in days, except maybe one, saving them for the best - and this certainly is.
It is priceless, I loved every word, I had tears in my eyes reading about bleeding hearts. This was a Tanka at its best. Great artwork.
I missed your writing, Gypsy. But I haven't been on the sight much.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
-
You honor me with your exceptional six stars review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
It's so sad when a native bird becomes extinct in it's own n habitat, I don't know if there are others held captive in zoos in the world or not, it's a real tragedy when That happens, beautifully written Tanka My friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
|
It's so sad when a native bird becomes extinct in it's own n habitat, I don't know if there are others held captive in zoos in the world or not, it's a real tragedy when That happens, beautifully written Tanka My friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
-
Roy
Thank you very much. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
-
Most welcome
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
This is a beautifully presented piece with the picture perfectly complementing the text! The words are poignant and the tone elegiac. The 'blue' font is appropriate!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
|
This is a beautifully presented piece with the picture perfectly complementing the text! The words are poignant and the tone elegiac. The 'blue' font is appropriate!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
-
Sarah,
Thank you very for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs!
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem - interesting picture presentation - Good word count - nicely worded - a thousand lonely nights waiting in our meeting place knowing you won't come - excellent flow - if this a male bird he is certainly determined, poor guy, however in the right meeting place - bleeding-heart flowers blooming - nice. Good Job. AP
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
|
I like your tanka poem - interesting picture presentation - Good word count - nicely worded - a thousand lonely nights waiting in our meeting place knowing you won't come - excellent flow - if this a male bird he is certainly determined, poor guy, however in the right meeting place - bleeding-heart flowers blooming - nice. Good Job. AP
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
-
AP,
Thank you very for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs!
Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is deep grief and sadness in these words and you cleverly included the last cry of this now extinct bird to add to the melancholy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
|
There is deep grief and sadness in these words and you cleverly included the last cry of this now extinct bird to add to the melancholy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
-
Dolly,
You honor me with your exceptional six stars review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
-
You deserve them, you enjoy your weekend too, love Dolly x
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your poem. The emotion flowed from it. Then I read the author's notes. How did the last Spix Macaw get from Brazil to where the flowers were in either China, Korea, or Japan. I think I over thought it. LOL Loved the poem.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
|
I enjoyed reading your poem. The emotion flowed from it. Then I read the author's notes. How did the last Spix Macaw get from Brazil to where the flowers were in either China, Korea, or Japan. I think I over thought it. LOL Loved the poem.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
-
Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your time and kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Sugarray77
A very lovely Tanka poetic entry for the prompt, Gypsy. It's such a colorful and vivid presentation that enhances the entire compilation. Well done and I wish you good fortune !!
Melissa
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
|
A very lovely Tanka poetic entry for the prompt, Gypsy. It's such a colorful and vivid presentation that enhances the entire compilation. Well done and I wish you good fortune !!
Melissa
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
-
Thank you very much, Melissa. I appreciate your time and kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
