Our Legacy!
Our children are...10 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A wonderful poem filled with every kind of daily lesson. If you do teach them right, they will be loving and truthful to their parents and siblings. If you treat them unkindly, they will remember.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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A wonderful poem filled with every kind of daily lesson. If you do teach them right, they will be loving and truthful to their parents and siblings. If you treat them unkindly, they will remember.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from Kaiku
Very nice. One can never say enough about the joy our children provide. Your words certainly echo so many of the families out there. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Very nice. One can never say enough about the joy our children provide. Your words certainly echo so many of the families out there. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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Comment from Anne Johnston
"Our children are Gods greatest gift to all,
our legacy they'll carry, when we're through."
Your poem is well written. Children certainly are a blessing from the Lord.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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"Our children are Gods greatest gift to all,
our legacy they'll carry, when we're through."
Your poem is well written. Children certainly are a blessing from the Lord.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
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You are very welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the poem and the topic.
-I think children are our legacy and also "our greatest gift."
-They add a lot to our lives, and allow us to see ourselves
through them sometimes.
-A very good concluding verse.
-I appreciate your poem and your love of your family.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the poem and the topic.
-I think children are our legacy and also "our greatest gift."
-They add a lot to our lives, and allow us to see ourselves
through them sometimes.
-A very good concluding verse.
-I appreciate your poem and your love of your family.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review...it came from the heart. :)
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply💕💕
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
I couldn't agree with you more!
The greatest gifts I have ever received are my children and grandchildren.
What a wonderful world it would be if everyone believed what you wrote.
Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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I couldn't agree with you more!
The greatest gifts I have ever received are my children and grandchildren.
What a wonderful world it would be if everyone believed what you wrote.
Good job.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked my poem.
Comment from lancellot
This is well constructed, and the general theme is one that I think many will agree with. I like the sentiment, even if logically I know that this isn't always the case. It makes with the positive feels and that may be enough.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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This is well constructed, and the general theme is one that I think many will agree with. I like the sentiment, even if logically I know that this isn't always the case. It makes with the positive feels and that may be enough.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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It's not always the case, you're right. But it was in my case.. :) thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from EVA LEE MILLER
To connect legacy and the greatest gift with children has been done wonderfully here. It's supportive of your theme and message when you state how "They're all the reasons for what life's about." To add that children are a gift from God, definitely solidifies how important children are. Very nice message.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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To connect legacy and the greatest gift with children has been done wonderfully here. It's supportive of your theme and message when you state how "They're all the reasons for what life's about." To add that children are a gift from God, definitely solidifies how important children are. Very nice message.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from susand3022
Very nice, Author,
I liked this poem about children. You're definitely right in what you say. They are the greatest gift. Bring untold joy, and are a fountain of unconditional love, both from within and without.
Lovely write,
Susan :)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Very nice, Author,
I liked this poem about children. You're definitely right in what you say. They are the greatest gift. Bring untold joy, and are a fountain of unconditional love, both from within and without.
Lovely write,
Susan :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from zanya
Let's hear it for the children - a poem brimming with love for children and the joy they bring us in our families -with the final line reminding us to give of our best in their upbringing
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Let's hear it for the children - a poem brimming with love for children and the joy they bring us in our families -with the final line reminding us to give of our best in their upbringing
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from JT traveller
Well written. I chose not to have children, a decision I made after years of discussion with my husband, now of twenty two years. I love that you are happy in your life as we are in ours.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Well written. I chose not to have children, a decision I made after years of discussion with my husband, now of twenty two years. I love that you are happy in your life as we are in ours.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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I respect women who make that decision...I was just referring to my own experience. Thank you for reading my poem. :)
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Thankyou for your kind words and respect ofy decision too ❤️
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Thankyou for your kind words and respect ofy decision too ❤️
