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Comment from dragonpoet
This is a wonderfully illustrated poem which shows that life and beaty do go on after death. This does give a feeling of grieving too.
Congratulations on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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This is a wonderfully illustrated poem which shows that life and beaty do go on after death. This does give a feeling of grieving too.
Congratulations on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Joan. I am always grateful to win any place in the contest.
Thank you very much for the wonderful 5 stars review. May you have a beautiful day.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome MariVal. Same to your.
Joan
Comment from mermaids
I like the various emotions that come through your words, grief, nature, newness and moving forward. The image of the doves in the cherry blossoms creates a painting of nature. Excellent haiku here.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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I like the various emotions that come through your words, grief, nature, newness and moving forward. The image of the doves in the cherry blossoms creates a painting of nature. Excellent haiku here.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words and the excellent five stars review!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Carlos' girl
Oh wow. This is sublime. That verse is so beautiful. The cold marble grave. And the images of the bough and the doves. Perfect union of images.
This one is a very special poem
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Oh wow. This is sublime. That verse is so beautiful. The cold marble grave. And the images of the bough and the doves. Perfect union of images.
This one is a very special poem
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words and the exceptional six stars review!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
This is a turn up, and a very good one considering the style of a great satori line, one that one wouldn't expect when reading and reviewing, beautifully written Gypsy, an excellent post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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This is a turn up, and a very good one considering the style of a great satori line, one that one wouldn't expect when reading and reviewing, beautifully written Gypsy, an excellent post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Roy
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
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A pleasure
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sad words, but warm memories and doves and blossom give this write an uplifting experience to combat grief and think of the life that was once shared, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Sad words, but warm memories and doves and blossom give this write an uplifting experience to combat grief and think of the life that was once shared, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Dolly,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Even in a place of utter sadness, there is beauty - the cherry blossoms. Even in a place of ending, new life begins - in the nest above. Lovely images.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Even in a place of utter sadness, there is beauty - the cherry blossoms. Even in a place of ending, new life begins - in the nest above. Lovely images.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Ginda,
Thank you very for your excellent review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs!
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and beautiful artwork with us. I have always been a fan of cherry blossoms ever since I saw them on the Tidal Basin in Washington D.C. Now because they're the subject of a beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and beautiful artwork with us. I have always been a fan of cherry blossoms ever since I saw them on the Tidal Basin in Washington D.C. Now because they're the subject of a beautiful poem.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your time and kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Gypsy. I always enjoy reading your work, and this one that is both sad and lovely creates an emotional response from your reader. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Hello Gypsy. I always enjoy reading your work, and this one that is both sad and lovely creates an emotional response from your reader. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Melissa. I appreciate your time and kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
I guess because of the doves nesting on the cherry blossom boughs renews the love even though the loved one has died. Lovely three-lined poem.
One suggestion for the contest which must address a loved one:
over her cold marble grave (your)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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I guess because of the doves nesting on the cherry blossom boughs renews the love even though the loved one has died. Lovely three-lined poem.
One suggestion for the contest which must address a loved one:
over her cold marble grave (your)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Big Sister. I appreciate your help with my grammar, I fixed it.
Love you ❤️
Marival
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written 3 Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used beautiful imagery and very nice descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written 3 Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used beautiful imagery and very nice descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Teri. I appreciate your time and kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis