Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Who is the fellow who is making an unexpected call about you? Could it be your dad? But your dad has passed, at least that's what you think .... like your story.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Who is the fellow who is making an unexpected call about you? Could it be your dad? But your dad has passed, at least that's what you think .... like your story.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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The man who adopted me. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
It looks like there is about to be a big turn in the near future, but sometimes in real life, we can't predict what will happen next. "Does whiskey talk?" Yeah, and many times too much. LOL. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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It looks like there is about to be a big turn in the near future, but sometimes in real life, we can't predict what will happen next. "Does whiskey talk?" Yeah, and many times too much. LOL. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Always appreciate your insights and reviews. Mean a lot.
Comment from hchriste
thanks for using the picture of Jack, he was a good dog with a lot of heart, like your story, well done, I usually don't rate story section just the ones who select a picture of mine form their cover, keep writing
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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thanks for using the picture of Jack, he was a good dog with a lot of heart, like your story, well done, I usually don't rate story section just the ones who select a picture of mine form their cover, keep writing
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from judiverse
Excellent conversation between Dusty and Brett. Brett doesn't care to talk about his father and suspects he's come to a bad end. Brett gives explanation for why he carries a knife. He is young to be on his own. I'm curious at the end of this about who Dusty is calling. Is this going to lead to something about Brett's father. Great chapter. You really bring out the emotions of both Dusty and Brett, although I'm concerned about why Dusty is so interest Brett, judi
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Excellent conversation between Dusty and Brett. Brett doesn't care to talk about his father and suspects he's come to a bad end. Brett gives explanation for why he carries a knife. He is young to be on his own. I'm curious at the end of this about who Dusty is calling. Is this going to lead to something about Brett's father. Great chapter. You really bring out the emotions of both Dusty and Brett, although I'm concerned about why Dusty is so interest Brett, judi
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Probably interested in me because Dusty adopted me. This is my autobiography. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love this story, but it's sad for you at the time. It sounds like you're starting to encounter different circumstances. You did a great job as always. Shirley
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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I love this story, but it's sad for you at the time. It sounds like you're starting to encounter different circumstances. You did a great job as always. Shirley
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, How fate always play it's hand in our life. This is is as amazing as it gets. That strange encounter were to change your life forever. I love it. I can't wait to reading on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Hi Brett, How fate always play it's hand in our life. This is is as amazing as it gets. That strange encounter were to change your life forever. I love it. I can't wait to reading on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is very touching, Brett. Do you suppose the reason you were so emotional when leaving that day was because he was the first human being who cared a fig about you or your situation?
God Bless him and all those child advocates who try to make a difference. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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This is very touching, Brett. Do you suppose the reason you were so emotional when leaving that day was because he was the first human being who cared a fig about you or your situation?
God Bless him and all those child advocates who try to make a difference. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Exactly. Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
Thanks for sharing some more of this story. I hate waiting. It appears that there is some light at the end of the tunnel. Did you really plan on returning to Hermitage Hall? I'm afraid that I'd catch the first truck heading out of town, but then, at twelve years old, there really isn't much good that could come from that. I'll try to be patient as I wait for the next episode. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Hello Brett,
Thanks for sharing some more of this story. I hate waiting. It appears that there is some light at the end of the tunnel. Did you really plan on returning to Hermitage Hall? I'm afraid that I'd catch the first truck heading out of town, but then, at twelve years old, there really isn't much good that could come from that. I'll try to be patient as I wait for the next episode. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Wendy G
I too was sorry Dusty didn't call him back and offer to look after him. He must have had connections , to be able to do a background check on a kid's records. Most would be confidential surely. I was surprised that you were planning to return to Hermitage Hall. Well written, an engaging but sad life story.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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I too was sorry Dusty didn't call him back and offer to look after him. He must have had connections , to be able to do a background check on a kid's records. Most would be confidential surely. I was surprised that you were planning to return to Hermitage Hall. Well written, an engaging but sad life story.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Had nowhere else to go. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Sounds like Dusty is well connected. I like how you admit there was a connection between the two of you. A lot of kids would have high tailed it away. You were feeling the loss as you were leaving the restaurant. Good descriptive phrases in this. I could feel the emotion between y'all. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Sounds like Dusty is well connected. I like how you admit there was a connection between the two of you. A lot of kids would have high tailed it away. You were feeling the loss as you were leaving the restaurant. Good descriptive phrases in this. I could feel the emotion between y'all. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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Definately feeling the loss. Appreciate your comments and the review.
