One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very well composed.
Where did you get the picture from?
Your selections of background and font color are tops. .....................................................................................................................
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Very well composed.
Where did you get the picture from?
Your selections of background and font color are tops. .....................................................................................................................
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Tom. I appreciate your time and kind words.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic Tanka, Gypsy. I absolutely loved the picture. Your words were so truthful and thoughtful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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What a fantastic Tanka, Gypsy. I absolutely loved the picture. Your words were so truthful and thoughtful. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Aryr,
Thank you for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,
You write such exquisitely
beauteous Japanese poetry
with much said with fewer
words. I hope your 1st week
of the New Year is fab.
Many blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,
You write such exquisitely
beauteous Japanese poetry
with much said with fewer
words. I hope your 1st week
of the New Year is fab.
Many blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review! Happy and prosperous 2023.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Beautiful. I love wild horses. They do refuse to conform. I sometimes think I have a bit of wild horse in me, lol. There is a beautiful wild horse sanctuary in South Dakota. I have bought beautiful gifts from their gift shop and sent support when I am able. BLACK HILLS WILD HORSE SANCTUARY.
THANK YOU for sharing.
Write onš???
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Beautiful. I love wild horses. They do refuse to conform. I sometimes think I have a bit of wild horse in me, lol. There is a beautiful wild horse sanctuary in South Dakota. I have bought beautiful gifts from their gift shop and sent support when I am able. BLACK HILLS WILD HORSE SANCTUARY.
THANK YOU for sharing.
Write onš???
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review! Happy and prosperous 2023.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I am wondering how many wild horses still exist today. I am betting not as many as there should be. It's a shame man has destroyed nature.
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I am wondering how many wild horses still exist today. I am betting not as many as there should be. It's a shame man has destroyed nature.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review! Happy and prosperous 2023.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Kaiku
Always a great exhibit of work. I find it quite difficult to review works as this. Messages provided are really at the discretion of the writer and not one to be challenged by the reader. Unless form is off or a particular word is misplaced or misused for whatever reason, then these types of post should always receive at a minimum of five stars and if it hits a particular chord with the reader then it becomes 6.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Always a great exhibit of work. I find it quite difficult to review works as this. Messages provided are really at the discretion of the writer and not one to be challenged by the reader. Unless form is off or a particular word is misplaced or misused for whatever reason, then these types of post should always receive at a minimum of five stars and if it hits a particular chord with the reader then it becomes 6.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review! I know what you mean. Most of all, Japanese poetry are visual, the imagery should connect to the reader. For English reviews, you can check if it's 17 syllables or less. If the first two lines connect grammatically, and there is a satori..last line should make you ponder, an aha! Moment.
Happy and prosperous 2023.
Gypsy hugs
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👍. Got it
Comment from RodG
Although I grew up in Nevada, I never saw a wild horse but heard a lot about them. I really like how much narrative you pack into this tanka. We wonder what stirred them so early and how they were able to elude the wranglers. Rod
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Although I grew up in Nevada, I never saw a wild horse but heard a lot about them. I really like how much narrative you pack into this tanka. We wonder what stirred them so early and how they were able to elude the wranglers. Rod
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review! Happy and prosperous 2023.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
America's wild horses are very much a part of America's culture as Bald Eagles.
Your beautiful poem pays homage to them, and the freedom they cherish.
Beautiful work.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Gypsy,
America's wild horses are very much a part of America's culture as Bald Eagles.
Your beautiful poem pays homage to them, and the freedom they cherish.
Beautiful work.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review! Happy and prosperous 2023.
Gypsy hugs
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Your poem deserved six stars, but I didn?t have any left.
Have a nice day, Gypsy.
Cindy
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a beautiful image, Marival. The horses refusing to give up their freedom.
Maybe I'll try to write a tanka for the competition myself.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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This is a beautiful image, Marival. The horses refusing to give up their freedom.
Maybe I'll try to write a tanka for the competition myself.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review! Happy and prosperous 2023.
Gypsy hugs
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Igualmente. x
Comment from karenina
Here's to the wild spirit in all of us! We will not be broken, we will not be penned... We will run wild and free and leave a trail of words behind us as a legacy of our indomitable spirit! Yes, big sister! I agree!
Karenina
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Here's to the wild spirit in all of us! We will not be broken, we will not be penned... We will run wild and free and leave a trail of words behind us as a legacy of our indomitable spirit! Yes, big sister! I agree!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Karenina,
Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review! Happy and prosperous 2023.
Gypsy hugs
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Back at you! Alk the best in 2023!