Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 6 word poem you have penned for the contest. I love your words that are so very true. Patience really does take practice. But I go back to where it says in the Bible "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me!" love and blessings! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023

Hi Teri, thanks for your comments and review. Thanks for giving me the Bible quote. and thanks for your best wishes re: the contest. Love, Donna x

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 6 Word Swap Quatrain Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Practice Makes Perfect
Perfect is Christ!
(Kinda nice?)
Good luck with your contest entry and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023

Dear Ricky, thanks for your comments and review and good luck wishes. Blessing, Dove

Comment from Bree Umbreit

Exceptional

I think that this is a beautiful piece. It is very simple overall, but I like the use of repetition to share a deeper meaning to the poetry. Wonderful job with this!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023

Dear Bree, thanks for your "exceptional" rating! thanks for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A clever little six worder here and I so agree with the sentiment. Patience and practice go hand in hand, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023

Hi Dolly thanks for your comments and review and good luck wishes. Love, Donna x