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Patience & Practice

6-word swap quatrain

14 total reviews 
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Exceptional
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I love this - a succinct poem telling two truths. Just as we have to grow in patience, our skill level also grows when we practise. Well done for fitting this into so few words - a well-deserved contest win.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Hi Sarah, thank you for your "exceptional" rating, and your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Congratulations on your well-deserved win. What you say about practice and patience is so true, no matter what we are trying to master, even if we are working on being more patient.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Dear Ginda, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Congratulations one your winning. You certainly deserved it with a six line poem with a deep meaning.
I truly enjoyed reading.
My very best wishes

Mary

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
    Dear Mary, thank you for your congrats and best wishes, and your review. Dove
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Marie,
These six words say a lot. It shows that talent takes practice and with patience you can become a master if you have the wish and talent.
Patience is a virtue that also takes as much practice as any other thing
Congrats on the contest win.
You chose appropriate artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Dear Joan, When I read your review just now, I had no idea that I was the winning entry! Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by dragonpoet on 15-Mar-2023
    You're very welcome, Dove.
    Joan
Comment from Contests

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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Thank you!! Dovemarie
Comment from JT traveller
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And so they do
Happy birthday for today. Good six word poem. I like it. Extremely sensible advice. Patience does take a lot of resolve at times. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
    Dear Jacqueline, thank you for your comments and review. Dove Thanks for the birthday wish.
Comment from Cherish Adams
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Absolutely, well said. Six word poetry should bring something home, make a mark - in my opinion. You did just that. Thank you for sharing. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Dear Cherish, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Ben Colder
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It reminds me of when my oldest daughter took piano lessons. The teacher's words were the same. "Practice with patients" works or did in her case. Thanks for sharing your talent.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Dear Ben, thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from royowen
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Learning a musical instrument takes hours and hours of repetition to master the art of playing an instrument, I learnt in my forties, to be a support for my daughters, one gave up, the other obtained her degree, now is a professional, I wrote many songs, I've taught others. Beautifully written, I know, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Dear Roy, I know too, it took me months of practice playing the piano to win an award when I was a child - a statuette of Bach. I still practice patience in my writing now too! I'm glad one of your daughters is a professional. Dove
reply by royowen on 14-Jan-2023
    Well done
Comment from Sally Law
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Oh my, don't I know about this. Mine was cheerleading. I practiced for hours and hours. Now that Im older, I dearly wish I had picked something else. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally XOs

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023
    Dear Sally, thank you for your comments and review. Dove