Pink Petals Cascade
A cinquain4 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A beautiful and very descriptive Cinquain, June. Love the C and B alliteration. Even without the lovely artwork you've chosen your words create the scene. Lovely writing, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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A beautiful and very descriptive Cinquain, June. Love the C and B alliteration. Even without the lovely artwork you've chosen your words create the scene. Lovely writing, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Thank you! I am looking forward to seeing spring flowers again. Glad you enjoyed this one on cherry blossoms.
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Very, very nice!
Artwork is a terrific companion to your contest entry.
Your verse is most descriptive of the feeling you created.
Mark
P.S. IMHO your presentation value will increase if you bold your text. Increasing your font size is your personal preference or not.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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June,
Very, very nice!
Artwork is a terrific companion to your contest entry.
Your verse is most descriptive of the feeling you created.
Mark
P.S. IMHO your presentation value will increase if you bold your text. Increasing your font size is your personal preference or not.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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I will change the font. Thank you for the great feedback and stars!
Comment from Ricky1024
"Pink Pedals Cascade"
A cinquain which was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
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The art work works well with this.
Cherry blossoms work well welcoming the thought of an early Spring
And this time of year is a good thing.
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This read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky 1924
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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"Pink Pedals Cascade"
A cinquain which was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
The art work works well with this.
Cherry blossoms work well welcoming the thought of an early Spring
And this time of year is a good thing.
...
This read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky 1924
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Wishes for an early spring always bring to mind the lovely cherry blossoms - a symbol of rebirth. Just a few short months! Thanks for stopping by to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What an elegant poem about cherry blossoms. Can they bloom in winter? I thought they usually bloom in the spring. I like our usage of word "frock". The are getting ready for the spring.
Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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What an elegant poem about cherry blossoms. Can they bloom in winter? I thought they usually bloom in the spring. I like our usage of word "frock". The are getting ready for the spring.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Wishes for an early spring always bring to mind the lovely cherry blossoms - a symbol of rebirth. Just a few short months! Thanks for stopping by to read and share your thoughts.