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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Letter from God "Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from jacquelyn popp
What a beautiful poem. This was written so beautifully and your words flowed together in such an awesome way. I loved the repetition about don't let these events define you. That really hit home and made me think of events in my life too. This was such a lovely read and I really enjoyed it. Thank y for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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What a beautiful poem. This was written so beautifully and your words flowed together in such an awesome way. I loved the repetition about don't let these events define you. That really hit home and made me think of events in my life too. This was such a lovely read and I really enjoyed it. Thank y for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Jacquelyn, I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my faith poem. And also for your gracious gift of six stars!
You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Terry Broxson
Debi, this is powerful insightful poem you have shared with anyone who reads it. Those who know your story are humbled by your faith and awareness to forgive and move forward. Exceptional work. Terry.
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Debi, this is powerful insightful poem you have shared with anyone who reads it. Those who know your story are humbled by your faith and awareness to forgive and move forward. Exceptional work. Terry.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2023
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I'm interested how you approached Jesus regarding this issue. I asked Him why he let it happen. I asked him where he was while I was being abused. He said, He couldn't about it, but I was never alone. He was there all of the time. Some might find that an unsatisfactory answer, but it made sense to me. I could go on but this is enough. If you want to discuss more, I'm here.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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I'm interested how you approached Jesus regarding this issue. I asked Him why he let it happen. I asked him where he was while I was being abused. He said, He couldn't about it, but I was never alone. He was there all of the time. Some might find that an unsatisfactory answer, but it made sense to me. I could go on but this is enough. If you want to discuss more, I'm here.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Someday sweet friend, lets talk.! if you feel like sharing your email with me it would be better than pm's. Thank you Liz
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Do you ever do video chat or phone chat?
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Beautiful work. So heartfelt and meaningful. And poetically very strong. Solid rhyming and meter and the repeating couplet with the twist at the very end was clever. Debi, where do you find the energy and ideas to write so many good poems?!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Beautiful work. So heartfelt and meaningful. And poetically very strong. Solid rhyming and meter and the repeating couplet with the twist at the very end was clever. Debi, where do you find the energy and ideas to write so many good poems?!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Oh Charles, you are just so sweet! Like you were from Minnesota Nice, blizzard, freezing cold country! So how many inches did Champlin get?
We were at 14 at news time. The grandkids sure got a vacation out of it this yr, as they had 2 snow days before vacation started and now today. So they've been out of school since the 21st. Doesn't look promising for tomorrow either.
Thank you my dear friend for the very kind comments and gracious gift of six stars. It truly means the world to me!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A beautiful image and beautiful poem to go with it, Debi.
-If you had written much more, I would be crying.
-I don't know if you wrote this without tears, but I admire you for sharing parts of your life that were difficult, but did wrote it in such a beautiful way. I felt like God was speaking to you through your heart.
-I love the refrains you added after each verse, and then they changed to the positive when God said:
"I'm thankful you let me back into your life
You found love, [jpy] and laughter, not evil and strife"
-You end the poem very well,
"Another New Year; your life's fresh as the rain,"
followed by the refrain.
-An excellent poem deserving of a win in the contest,
but from what you expressed here, you have already won, my friend.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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-A beautiful image and beautiful poem to go with it, Debi.
-If you had written much more, I would be crying.
-I don't know if you wrote this without tears, but I admire you for sharing parts of your life that were difficult, but did wrote it in such a beautiful way. I felt like God was speaking to you through your heart.
-I love the refrains you added after each verse, and then they changed to the positive when God said:
"I'm thankful you let me back into your life
You found love, [jpy] and laughter, not evil and strife"
-You end the poem very well,
"Another New Year; your life's fresh as the rain,"
followed by the refrain.
-An excellent poem deserving of a win in the contest,
but from what you expressed here, you have already won, my friend.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Oh Pam, I have won because of friends like you in our second family. I know God led me here cause I ask him every morning to let me be a blessing to others, and he fooled me because I am the one being blessed! I have never been this happy. And it's because of you all! I just love you to pieces and that is from holding inside for so long.It feels so good that I can finally be who God meant me to be. I know I am a bit over emotional but it's my breakthrough! So I made a promise to tell people how I feel. God is great. He gave me you! (.Hugs) I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. And also for your gift of six stars! You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend! And now you know what you mean to me too! (one more hug) Big Smile too!
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Debi. I am glad you are happy, and that it felt good to express your feelings. Many times it is a cathartic experience. Your hugs, smiles, and friendship mean a lot to me, too. Have a great day and wonderful New Year!!!
Comment from GWHARGIS
Knowing what I know now about you, I found this poem comforting. I am so happy that you can look at life differently. Of course, the pain and memory of what happened will never go away but it doesn't come between you and God and you and your living family. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Knowing what I know now about you, I found this poem comforting. I am so happy that you can look at life differently. Of course, the pain and memory of what happened will never go away but it doesn't come between you and God and you and your living family. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Gretchen, and it definitely doesn't come between me and my precious friends like you in our second family. I know God led me here cause I asked him every morning to let me be a blessing to others, and he fooled me because I am the one being blessed! I have never been this happy. And it's because of you all! I just love you to pieces and that is from holding inside for so long. So I made a promise to tell people how I feel. God is great. He gave me you! (.Hugs) I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. And also for your gift of six stars!
You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend! And now you know what you mean to me too! (tears of joy)
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Awe.💞
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Comment from LaTessa
I absolutely love this poem! It's definitely something I can relate to. The flow of it is great and I love how your tone changed in the end. It was more hopeful. Best of luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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I absolutely love this poem! It's definitely something I can relate to. The flow of it is great and I love how your tone changed in the end. It was more hopeful. Best of luck with the contest!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Hello again Tessa! Thanks for the awesome review and comments for this poem. As always, you are so appreciated my dear friend!
Comment from evilynne
Your poem speaks volumes of your faith and newfound outlook on life. You have endured terrible hardships and emerged a winner. God has granted you the courage to go ahead, to look for a brighter future. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Your poem speaks volumes of your faith and newfound outlook on life. You have endured terrible hardships and emerged a winner. God has granted you the courage to go ahead, to look for a brighter future. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Evi, as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. And also for your gift of six stars!
You have no idea how much the whole package means to me!
It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
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Comment from Regina Elliott
Hello beauteous Debi!
This is such a loving and
uplifting Christian poem.
Definitely written about one
of the Lord's overcomers!
So well penned my good
and wonderful friend. Many
blessings to you & your family
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Hello beauteous Debi!
This is such a loving and
uplifting Christian poem.
Definitely written about one
of the Lord's overcomers!
So well penned my good
and wonderful friend. Many
blessings to you & your family
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Hey my sweet Regina, thank you so very much for reading and reviewing my silly poem. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very kind comments.
Thank you again my dear friend.
Comment from Teri7
Debi, It's as if you wrote this for me also! This is a very refreshing and lovely faith poem you have penned for the contest. Thank you so much for sharing my friend! May God bless you always! love, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Debi, It's as if you wrote this for me also! This is a very refreshing and lovely faith poem you have penned for the contest. Thank you so much for sharing my friend! May God bless you always! love, Teri
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Hi Teri! Thanks for the awesome review and comments for this poem. As always, you are so appreciated my dear friend!
