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Comment from Ricky1024
"Knee Deep in Dew"
This is 4/6/5/7/9 Modern Tanka.
Based on how lovers feel.
Skin soft and moist as if the silken flower in wet dew
Renewed new Life
Well written with excellent art work including font and backroom colors.
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I believe Poetry is also Art.
Yes, a painting within the mind.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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"Knee Deep in Dew"
This is 4/6/5/7/9 Modern Tanka.
Based on how lovers feel.
Skin soft and moist as if the silken flower in wet dew
Renewed new Life
Well written with excellent art work including font and backroom colors.
...
I believe Poetry is also Art.
Yes, a painting within the mind.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is a powerful, passionate poem.
The colors you've chosen for the lay-out (luminous red) also radiate an aura of passion.
Great work, Gypsy,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Gypsy,
This is a powerful, passionate poem.
The colors you've chosen for the lay-out (luminous red) also radiate an aura of passion.
Great work, Gypsy,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Cindy, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a great tanka, Gypsy. I loved your dual pictures. Your words were beautiful and full of meaning. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs! Happy New Years!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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What a great tanka, Gypsy. I loved your dual pictures. Your words were beautiful and full of meaning. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs! Happy New Years!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Aryr (*<>*)
Blessed be.... and hugs.
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a gorgeous poem and captivating words. I was wondering if the lady was perhaps in a bathtub with tons of bubbles floating, making the dew mist. Candles are burning softly as she makes the memory lasting.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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what a gorgeous poem and captivating words. I was wondering if the lady was perhaps in a bathtub with tons of bubbles floating, making the dew mist. Candles are burning softly as she makes the memory lasting.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this is what I call and Ooh-la-la poem. Seductive words and sensual imagery let the mind create and complete the scene. Beautifully penned gorgeous photo. Overall excellence. Happy new year, my friend.
Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Hi Gypsy, this is what I call and Ooh-la-la poem. Seductive words and sensual imagery let the mind create and complete the scene. Beautifully penned gorgeous photo. Overall excellence. Happy new year, my friend.
Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You sucked us in with the passionate artwork and then continued with the use of texture words, soft and moist
like silk in the rain. So much passion that it spreads across the floor burnt in his memory ... forever. WOW!
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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You sucked us in with the passionate artwork and then continued with the use of texture words, soft and moist
like silk in the rain. So much passion that it spreads across the floor burnt in his memory ... forever. WOW!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
Comment from royowen
I just love the pivot like that sets up the whole poem, the artwork goes quite a distance to reveal the theme within is great ambiguity, this is beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I just love the pivot like that sets up the whole poem, the artwork goes quite a distance to reveal the theme within is great ambiguity, this is beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
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You too Gypsy,
Comment from Kayte Ray
Beautiful imagery here. Well written flowing piece. You make the reader feel with this piece. Your presentation is flawless from graphic to color choice to font usage, beautiful all around.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Beautiful imagery here. Well written flowing piece. You make the reader feel with this piece. Your presentation is flawless from graphic to color choice to font usage, beautiful all around.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
Comment from lyenochka
Wow ! That's some passion - a burning passion that still burns in memory of the beloved one! I like all the textures you use in the poem including the softness of silk and the moisture of rain.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Wow ! That's some passion - a burning passion that still burns in memory of the beloved one! I like all the textures you use in the poem including the softness of silk and the moisture of rain.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Thank you, big sister (*<>*)
Love you,
Marival ❤️
Comment from irishauthorme
Intricate, intimate use of this poetic form.
The passion is giving, yet taking.
"like silk in the rain-" what a great line!
Interesting history, have read many tankas over the years here on FS, but never heard the history.
Thanks for sharing!
irish
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Intricate, intimate use of this poetic form.
The passion is giving, yet taking.
"like silk in the rain-" what a great line!
Interesting history, have read many tankas over the years here on FS, but never heard the history.
Thanks for sharing!
irish
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy New Year!
Gypsy Sensei Word Weaver
