Haiku(complete stillness)
a haiku33 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery.
-We can feel the "bitter cold"
and see the winter scene immersed in the stillness.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery.
-We can feel the "bitter cold"
and see the winter scene immersed in the stillness.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you Pam!!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated seasonal haiku. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. I especially like your last line. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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This is a beautifully stated seasonal haiku. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. I especially like your last line. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much, Sandra!
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You are welcome.
Comment from harmony13
This poem really resonated with me! I found the author's words descriptive and creative. Silence is where I always find peace. The author's words are expressed well and flow and connect well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these words. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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This poem really resonated with me! I found the author's words descriptive and creative. Silence is where I always find peace. The author's words are expressed well and flow and connect well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these words. Great Poem!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Maria!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Haiku (seasonal) writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Excellent satori with a delightful juxtaposition.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Wonderful entry for the Haiku (seasonal) writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Excellent satori with a delightful juxtaposition.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much, Gypsy.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a very beautiful haiku and the art is perfect. I love winter scenes and this one along with your poem would make a gorgeous poster. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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This is a very beautiful haiku and the art is perfect. I love winter scenes and this one along with your poem would make a gorgeous poster. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much Mary. I am delighted you like it!!!
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You are welcome. Happy New Year!
Comment from Janet Foor
A perfect picture to accompany this lovely seasonal haiku. Winter, cold, stillness are excellent descriptions of this time of year. I enjoyed reading.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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A perfect picture to accompany this lovely seasonal haiku. Winter, cold, stillness are excellent descriptions of this time of year. I enjoyed reading.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Janet. :)
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent entry for the Haiku contest. Syllable requirements are met, it focuses on nature, and the third line is well done. The touches of alliteration are well done. Best wishes!
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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An excellent entry for the Haiku contest. Syllable requirements are met, it focuses on nature, and the third line is well done. The touches of alliteration are well done. Best wishes!
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you Wendy.
Comment from Mark D. R.
I am still warmed by the idea of this seasonal Haiku. Verse and artwork are synced nicely.
Stillness and silence, aside from their alliterative touch, are paired nicely. You also had the d-letter alliteration in your last line - nice!
Well done overall presentation for this contest entry.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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I am still warmed by the idea of this seasonal Haiku. Verse and artwork are synced nicely.
Stillness and silence, aside from their alliterative touch, are paired nicely. You also had the d-letter alliteration in your last line - nice!
Well done overall presentation for this contest entry.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Mark!!
Comment from prettybluebirds
All one has to do is look at the picture to feel the deep stillness of winter. The words you chose are lovely, and the artwork complements them. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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All one has to do is look at the picture to feel the deep stillness of winter. The words you chose are lovely, and the artwork complements them. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written haiku, and a darn good haiku, yes, who knows what dwells in silence. There are things in life that we can't possibly perceive or understand. Beautifully written, and excellent post, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Beautifully written haiku, and a darn good haiku, yes, who knows what dwells in silence. There are things in life that we can't possibly perceive or understand. Beautifully written, and excellent post, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much, Roy!!
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Most welcome
