Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Your haiku poem has all the elements that describe the wintry season. You chose the appropriate strong words which have an impact on the readers mind: stillness, deep...etc.
I could feel the bitter cold!!!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022

Thank you so much.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Haiku (complete stillness)
Silence, stillness, bitter, cold.
Sounds to me for a Great Recipe for Immediate Death!
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery it also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022

Thanks so much!!!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh the silence of the winter when nothing is growing and everything is at rest. It is a time of year when we should also be catching up on our sleep, I enjoyed the tranquility within these words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022

Thank you.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent traditional 5-7-5 haiku for the contest
with excellent winter imagery and use of alliteration.
The third line works nicely to enhance the icy stillness.
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022

Thank you so much Robert!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Good

Aha. A haiku with meaning it seems. Well thought out miss or fellow. .........................................................................................................................................

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022

Thanks so much Tom... you're a hoot!!!

Comment from Thomas Blanks

Excellent

It appears as if you found the perfect photo and then wrote a beautiful haiku to suit it. That is usually better than the other way around. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022

Thanks so much Thomas!

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is lovely and paints a picture in the mind. It makes me feel cold and yet appreciative of the beauty that winter brings. This is a fine contest entry, best of luck to you. :)

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022

Thanks so much Sharon!

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

This is an outstanding entry for the Seasonal Haiku Contest.

You really captured the mystic and wonderment of winter. Heck, it would be paradise, you know, if it weren't for the cold.

Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022

Thank you Douglas!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written seasonal haiku you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022

Thank you Teri!

Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

What a gorgeous image you have chosen! Those colours are stunning and your poem is a beautiful accompaniment that speaks of the wintery stillness and cold. A well thought through Haiku.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022

Thanks so much Karyn!!