Rhythm
Spirited.6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This eight-word poem, Rhythm, has the proper formatting and allows that one can be a fan and appreciate something that cannot be directly participated in anymore.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
This eight-word poem, Rhythm, has the proper formatting and allows that one can be a fan and appreciate something that cannot be directly participated in anymore.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2023
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Thanks so very much.
Comment from Kaiku
Very good. Totally captured a significant energy and existence. Good job and congrats on topping the list. Well deserved. Continue your fine expressions in short form. Happy Nee Year.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
Very good. Totally captured a significant energy and existence. Good job and congrats on topping the list. Well deserved. Continue your fine expressions in short form. Happy Nee Year.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! Thanks for the great review.
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You are welcome. Best to you.
Comment from JT traveller
This resonates with me. I envision a dancing soul trapped in an introverts body. Well composed. Great choice of words. Well done. Thankyou for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
This resonates with me. I envision a dancing soul trapped in an introverts body. Well composed. Great choice of words. Well done. Thankyou for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Your words make me smile, thank you.
Comment from zanya
Interesting angle on the 8 word prompt-one word titles can convey so much as is the case here - and with such an appropriate visual to illustrate - thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
Interesting angle on the 8 word prompt-one word titles can convey so much as is the case here - and with such an appropriate visual to illustrate - thanks for sharing
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Your review means a great deal, thank you.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your entire creative idea is beautiful. In only eight words, you present a vivid image that resonates with my musician's spirit. Your captivating artwork delivers rich imagery that pairs perfectly with your poem. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
Your entire creative idea is beautiful. In only eight words, you present a vivid image that resonates with my musician's spirit. Your captivating artwork delivers rich imagery that pairs perfectly with your poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
This is carefully thoughtout and interesting. The literal:/ symbolic meanings are well conveyed in such a short piece. Effective choice of illustration!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
This is carefully thoughtout and interesting. The literal:/ symbolic meanings are well conveyed in such a short piece. Effective choice of illustration!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you.