Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 88 "Yesterday Child"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Mark Schardine
away from dark dirty hands ~
bound in chains of shame
An innocent child should be living a happy life, one far from any danger, and we see the criminal nature of the acts committed against this person.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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away from dark dirty hands ~
bound in chains of shame
An innocent child should be living a happy life, one far from any danger, and we see the criminal nature of the acts committed against this person.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a great day or night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am wondering about the horrors this child hid from in the wheat fields and from whom. No child should ever have to live in fear. Thank you for bringing this issue to the forefront.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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I am wondering about the horrors this child hid from in the wheat fields and from whom. No child should ever have to live in fear. Thank you for bringing this issue to the forefront.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Barbara,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from aryr
Another wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were enticing to me. Your words filled me with a heart felt sense of wonder- the innocence of a child means so much. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Another wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were enticing to me. Your words filled me with a heart felt sense of wonder- the innocence of a child means so much. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Aryr,
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy Sensei
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Heartbreaking and heartfelt of how a child must hide in fear. With your words, one can "see" and "feel " the child's terror.
Brilliantly written and presented.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Heartbreaking and heartfelt of how a child must hide in fear. With your words, one can "see" and "feel " the child's terror.
Brilliantly written and presented.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Mary,
Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review. You're very kind.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem- excellent picture presentation - good word count and flow - I find this type of poem particularly interesting- had some female clients- in Grad school- psychology- volunteer work- some deeply scared as children- so tragic- I was deeply affected- their life long chains-enough said- I am curious about what toasted wheat fields represent- maybe nothing- just curious. Good write- good job AP
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I like your tanka poem- excellent picture presentation - good word count and flow - I find this type of poem particularly interesting- had some female clients- in Grad school- psychology- volunteer work- some deeply scared as children- so tragic- I was deeply affected- their life long chains-enough said- I am curious about what toasted wheat fields represent- maybe nothing- just curious. Good write- good job AP
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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The wheat field is a real place where girl hid from her cousin.
Thank you very much, ap.
Gypsy hugs
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Oh okay - makes sense- thanks for sharing hug
Comment from Ricky1024
This is another Tanks with great artwork.
I can see when this book is finally completely done.
It will be well written and Exceptional color wise.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This is another Tanks with great artwork.
I can see when this book is finally completely done.
It will be well written and Exceptional color wise.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
This poem speaks to me of a child who was either abused or in danger of being sexually abused and has to hide to keep innocence. So much fear to deal with for such children!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This poem speaks to me of a child who was either abused or in danger of being sexually abused and has to hide to keep innocence. So much fear to deal with for such children!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Yes, that's true. Thank you, Big Sister. I appreciate your time and kind review. Love and hugs
Marival ❤️
Comment from Kayte Ray
Wow
I can see the child of the piece
You have a great presentation here and have nailed some very complex emotions. Your presentation is beautiful as well with the contrast of black and gold. This piece just really spoke to me. Well written.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Wow
I can see the child of the piece
You have a great presentation here and have nailed some very complex emotions. Your presentation is beautiful as well with the contrast of black and gold. This piece just really spoke to me. Well written.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and it's tragic that it is happening at all. Like the Pat Benatar song, Hell is for Children, it sickens me, but it's just one of many things
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and it's tragic that it is happening at all. Like the Pat Benatar song, Hell is for Children, it sickens me, but it's just one of many things
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Yes. I like pat benatar, that song is very sad.
Thank you very much, Mike. It's always good to hear from you.
Gypsy