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Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Debi Thank you for a lovely poem and yes FS is like a virtual family all like minded writers with so many variations in styles and makes for a fun site to be on
Happy New Year to you too
Your poem is well written
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Chris, as always you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Ulla
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Aw, Debi, what a wonderful poem this is to all of us. Yes, indeed, we are like an extended family. I wish you and yours all the best in the new year. Lots of love and good luck in the contest. A big hug, Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Ulla, as always you are so sweet. I had you on my mind as I wrote this and have been praying for a better year for you. Also on my mind, because you are so special to me. One of the loveliest people I know. And I don''t say that unless it is true. (Big smile and hug) I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Begin Again
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What a beautiful and welcoming New Year's Poem toasting friends on Fanstory. You did an awesome job with your gracious words and thoughts and I am positive that each of us returns the same wishes to you.

HAPPY NEW YEAR AND MAY IT BE FILLED WITH JOY, PEACE, HAPPINESS AND LOVE FROM EVERYONE.

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
    Carol, you are precious! I can't thank you enough for such a lovely review, words and gracious gift of six stars. You are exactly part of why I love so many here. Thank you again my sweet friend!
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you for the lovely toast and kind New Year's wishes, Debi dear. A delightful mono rhyming poem and message for us all to carry into the New Year ahead. I feel we need it now more than ever.

On little nit my blind reader caught. Stanza one has [Tor] instead of [For] which has a similar look in this font.

For honesty and not pretense.

I hope this helps and adds to your fine post. If I am off, please disregard.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the new year and warmth and good cheer!
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    My eye specialist is restricting how much time Im on my computer or iPad for a while. I thank you so very much for your lovely review, kind words and gracious six stars for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
reply by Sally Law on 31-Dec-2022
    My pleasure! I'm glad you are taking it easy. Love and blessings,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Debi, I got one six left, and you get it. Your New Year's poem is excellent for this contest, good luck. Your work is always heartfelt, and it shows. I also admire the way you use the tools on the advanced editor to enhance your presentation, and they are always excellent. Keep up the good work for 2023! Terry.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
    Terry, you are awesome! I can't thank you enough for such a kind review, words and gracious gift of six stars. You are exactly part of why I love so many here. Thank you again my dear friend!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and good presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a very good poem for our FanStory family.
-Effective imagery and rhyme that show how much
you appreciate the connection with other writers:
"Support, encouragement, no doubt" and
"Buffet of seasoned writer's skill"
-A very good concluding verse.
-A very good entry; good luck,
and have a great New Year!!!!!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Pam, you are so sweet. I am so sorry for the late thank you, but my eye specialists are restricting how much time I'm on my computer or iPad for a while. I thank you so very much for your lovely review, kind words and gracious six stars for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Dec-2022
    You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Debi. I am sorry to hear about your eyes, but hope they are better soon.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Happy new year to you, too! Hoping 2023 brings healing and goals met with your recovery. Also look forward to many more poems such as this one:-)

xx
Pam

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Pam, as always you are so sweet. You my dear, are one of my biggest treats of 2022. I always felt we had a special friendship, but finding out that we are darn near twins, well that changes everything. Lol. It truly is special tho.
    I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Happy New Year Debi and I enjoyed your good wishes here as we celebrate it together on Fanstory with our poetry and story writing, good rhymes here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Dolly, as always you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Boogienights
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A very happy new year to you and your family. I've enjoyed your poetry immensely and admire your talent, although I'm not sure I will continue on this site. It's become uncomfortable for me to post anymore, even though I love to write and have found a lot of happiness on FanStory. Thank you for this wonderful and heartfelt message.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
    Sharon, thank you for your kind review, comments and for the six stars.
    I'm not sure what to say about you being uncomfortable here. I stuck up for you for quite a while and even congratulated you whenever we were within a vote or two a part in contests when you won. Only then to find out that you had three extra voters who obviously knew your work in blind contests.
    I was heartbroken that you could do that to me and others.
    Being honest with everyone now may be more rewarding for you than what you realize. People are willing to forgive a mistake thru sincere apologies and promise that they no longer vote. You might find that you even like yourself a lot more when you truly earn the votes. Your a good writer. Have more confidence in your ability.
reply by Boogienights on 30-Dec-2022
    First of all, I like myself just fine and I have a lot of confidence in my work. I have TWO daughters who are fanstory members, pay their dues and can vote for whomever they please. They have done nothing wrong either. I have never cheated nor had multiple accounts like Ms Allen has accused me of. Her jealousy and bitterness have made me regret just one thing....that I I am a part of this site. I am rethinking this. Thanks for taking the time to reply.
reply by Boogienights on 30-Dec-2022
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I really liked your piece here. It's a nice warm tribute to fellow members and expresses how many of us feel about the site.

The only minor thing I stumbled on was on the penultimate line where it says drink or beer. Maybe there's a better way to express this - wine or beer perhaps?

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
    Thank you so much giraffmang, for your kind review and comments.
    One of the things that I appreciate the most is honest feedback.. I struggled with this line, so your perception and opinion are priceless to me. I'm on my way to change right now. Thanks again my friend!