No Return
His touch was magical5 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Nance
Compelling work. Every word of this poem packed a punch. I have read whole chapters of erotica that didn't say as much. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Compelling work. Every word of this poem packed a punch. I have read whole chapters of erotica that didn't say as much. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Wow, appreciate your review.
Comment from Dr. Von
The writing prompt is addressed very well in your poem. I like the simple, direct words expressing the power of human connection in the right circumstances. The artwork supports the message of heat. I liked reading your work.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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The writing prompt is addressed very well in your poem. I like the simple, direct words expressing the power of human connection in the right circumstances. The artwork supports the message of heat. I liked reading your work.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Always appreciated.
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Very welcome.
Comment from Karyn2
Hmmmm. If I'm being completely honest I'm not really sure what you mean with this poem!! Just jokes lol! Flaming fire, lust and passion! Well what can I say?! I think the image, words, font background are pretty self explanatory! Wowzers. I think you captured the theme well.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Hmmmm. If I'm being completely honest I'm not really sure what you mean with this poem!! Just jokes lol! Flaming fire, lust and passion! Well what can I say?! I think the image, words, font background are pretty self explanatory! Wowzers. I think you captured the theme well.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Hmmmm, you are very funny. 😂. Thanks for taking the time to read and share your nice review.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
In a total of 14 syllables, you have painted a picture of passion, its pull, its promise and the feeling that life will never be the same from that instant onwards.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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In a total of 14 syllables, you have painted a picture of passion, its pull, its promise and the feeling that life will never be the same from that instant onwards.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Hopefully I did it in 11. I am glad you liked it.
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You did! My math skills are failing...
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Welcome to the club. 🥴
Comment from Mario PIERRE
The few well chosen words are powerful enough to describe the strong feeling of passionate love.
Very well constructed, best of luck for the contest!
Mario
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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The few well chosen words are powerful enough to describe the strong feeling of passionate love.
Very well constructed, best of luck for the contest!
Mario
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for reading and the fine review.
