Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "I Can Do As I Please"A A new threat arises to the north.
3 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Von
This is a good chapter that ties the chapters that have unresolved bibles. Your writing commands attention to the weaponry, battles, and characters involved. I like that you maintain action and surprise. It could be helpful to the reader to settle on the tenses. Good work weaving this tale.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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This is a good chapter that ties the chapters that have unresolved bibles. Your writing commands attention to the weaponry, battles, and characters involved. I like that you maintain action and surprise. It could be helpful to the reader to settle on the tenses. Good work weaving this tale.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you my friend! I will certainly take a look at the tenses.
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You are very welcome. Have a happy and prosperous year.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great chapter again!!! Full of action, suspense and emotions. I reviewed a few prior chapters and am getting to know the characters more and more. The writing style is very enjoyable and we never feel bored by some lengthy descriptions, as they are necessary to understand the story.
Great job!!
M
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Great chapter again!!! Full of action, suspense and emotions. I reviewed a few prior chapters and am getting to know the characters more and more. The writing style is very enjoyable and we never feel bored by some lengthy descriptions, as they are necessary to understand the story.
Great job!!
M
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you Mario!
Comment from Ricky1024
I think this is about the 10th chapter I've written in a all have been wonderful with plenty of battles and wonderful new characters.
Again wrll written rich in theme and Imagery.
And, thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I think this is about the 10th chapter I've written in a all have been wonderful with plenty of battles and wonderful new characters.
Again wrll written rich in theme and Imagery.
And, thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you my friend. I appreciate you hanging in!
