red Passion for you
my passion for my wife2 total reviews
Comment from Jay Squires
Red, always the color of passion, blood, flow, emotions; always growing pumping like the heart. I can't think of a better instant cognizer than the word red when you want the mind to go to passion. And when you only have 11 syllables. But of course...
Jay
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Red, always the color of passion, blood, flow, emotions; always growing pumping like the heart. I can't think of a better instant cognizer than the word red when you want the mind to go to passion. And when you only have 11 syllables. But of course...
Jay
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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thanks
Comment from Kayte Ray
Great presentation and graphic choices. Ordinarily I suggest larger fonts because of 40 year old eyes. However, I think that having to focus a little on the smaller fonts and text draw the reader into the emotion of your piece. Your syllable count is also right on the mark. Good work
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Great presentation and graphic choices. Ordinarily I suggest larger fonts because of 40 year old eyes. However, I think that having to focus a little on the smaller fonts and text draw the reader into the emotion of your piece. Your syllable count is also right on the mark. Good work
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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thanks I will revise the fonts