Puppy Eyes
3.5.3 poem10 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
Excellent picture shared, and marvelous story. Explored in so few words. Dogs certainly have a way of expressing their love and passion for their owners. And dog owners reciprocate as well. Thanks for sharing for the dog lover, who is unable to have a dog. Embrace the love from above.
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Excellent picture shared, and marvelous story. Explored in so few words. Dogs certainly have a way of expressing their love and passion for their owners. And dog owners reciprocate as well. Thanks for sharing for the dog lover, who is unable to have a dog. Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
Cuteness overload, I love your wee poem and the pic just made my heart melt. I would take the tyke home.
Best of luck !
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
Cuteness overload, I love your wee poem and the pic just made my heart melt. I would take the tyke home.
Best of luck !
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Beautiful presentation and imagery.
You feel passion for your puppy?
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Wonderful entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Beautiful presentation and imagery.
You feel passion for your puppy?
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
Comment from RodG
Yes, puppies can really express love with the way they look at you, but their passionate BEHAVIOR--the wagging tails, the leaps into your lap, the ceaseless kisses--is what really hooks you.
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Yes, puppies can really express love with the way they look at you, but their passionate BEHAVIOR--the wagging tails, the leaps into your lap, the ceaseless kisses--is what really hooks you.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from RodG
Yes, puppies can really express love with the way they look at you, but their passionate BEHAVIOR--the wagging tails, the leaps into your lap, the ceaseless kisses--is what really hooks you.
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Yes, puppies can really express love with the way they look at you, but their passionate BEHAVIOR--the wagging tails, the leaps into your lap, the ceaseless kisses--is what really hooks you.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
Aww, that sure is a sweet picture. There is nothing like those looks a puppy can give one. My dog is old but can still give me looks of love. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
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Aww, that sure is a sweet picture. There is nothing like those looks a puppy can give one. My dog is old but can still give me looks of love. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Puppy Eyes, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of that innocent and trusting face that a dog has. The onus is on us to be as good as they think we are.
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This 3-5-3, Puppy Eyes, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of that innocent and trusting face that a dog has. The onus is on us to be as good as they think we are.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Adorable image and nice presentation.
-What color did you use for the brown background?
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration describe the
adorable and loving nature of dogs.
-A good concluding line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Adorable image and nice presentation.
-What color did you use for the brown background?
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration describe the
adorable and loving nature of dogs.
-A good concluding line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from royowen
We've always had pets, and we've always been aware of their qualities and their ability to bring comfort and perspective in our lives, this is beautifully written my friend, good luck in the lune contest, blessings Roy
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We've always had pets, and we've always been aware of their qualities and their ability to bring comfort and perspective in our lives, this is beautifully written my friend, good luck in the lune contest, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
Comment from jessizero
I love your poem. Dogs can love unconditionally, and it shows when they give their "puppy eyes." Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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I love your poem. Dogs can love unconditionally, and it shows when they give their "puppy eyes." Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thanks for your review Jess. I've been caught victim to those eyes too many times.