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Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "parchment stains"keep your hope alive....
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Comment from WriterHeather
Love this! The picture looks like blood bleeding from a writer's pen. Writers pour a piece of their soul into all of their work so this is fitting. Wonderful job! Thank you for sharing
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Love this! The picture looks like blood bleeding from a writer's pen. Writers pour a piece of their soul into all of their work so this is fitting. Wonderful job! Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
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thank you heather! 😊💗🖊️📝
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Strong, powerful and sharp as a knife. Your poem summarize the epitome passion in eight words. Really well deserved win. Hope to read more from you
Mario
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Strong, powerful and sharp as a knife. Your poem summarize the epitome passion in eight words. Really well deserved win. Hope to read more from you
Mario
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
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thank you mario 🤩😊💗🖊️🌈
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an outstanding poem. It captures the passion and fire that a writer often has for his/her craft. It's one of those poem I wish I'd written. This is a winner, if I ever saw one!
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This is an outstanding poem. It captures the passion and fire that a writer often has for his/her craft. It's one of those poem I wish I'd written. This is a winner, if I ever saw one!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
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thank you mary 😎
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You are welcome.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I liked the drama surrounding this. You seem to feel the pain of the creativity in the first line. Then the major organ that is both literal and symbolic. The red could be perceived as either blood or red ink. Very cool. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
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I liked the drama surrounding this. You seem to feel the pain of the creativity in the first line. Then the major organ that is both literal and symbolic. The red could be perceived as either blood or red ink. Very cool. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
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thank you gw 😎
Comment from lancellot
passion bled
from a writer's heart
stains parchment
Sometimes, the words we scribe do come from our hearts or represent our deepest personal passions. I suppose when it does, that can be easily seen.
Good entry.
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passion bled
from a writer's heart
stains parchment
Sometimes, the words we scribe do come from our hearts or represent our deepest personal passions. I suppose when it does, that can be easily seen.
Good entry.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
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thank you lance 😎
Comment from Wendy G
I think this has changed from when I first read it yesterday, and it is better, so well done. Your presentation is excellent and appropriate for your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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I think this has changed from when I first read it yesterday, and it is better, so well done. Your presentation is excellent and appropriate for your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
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lol yes, i edited it. thank you wendy 😎
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When I was reading this and saw the word parchment, I thought of a thin sheet of paper that you lay on your baking sheet. But when it comes from a writer's heart you are not baking but perhaps breaking instead.
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When I was reading this and saw the word parchment, I thought of a thin sheet of paper that you lay on your baking sheet. But when it comes from a writer's heart you are not baking but perhaps breaking instead.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
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thank you rosemary 😎
Comment from dellsworthpoet
An interesting poem. The flow is good. The image is clear. The picture enhances the experience.
My only comment:
The last line begs the question since both the image and the word writer hold the assumption of unspoken. I might think "stains parchment".
Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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An interesting poem. The flow is good. The image is clear. The picture enhances the experience.
My only comment:
The last line begs the question since both the image and the word writer hold the assumption of unspoken. I might think "stains parchment".
Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
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🤔oooh me likey! will definitely consider!! thank you dell 😎
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You are most welcome.
Comment from mermaids
You have a vivid use of words for a short poem. Your last line which is one word "unspoken", captures the life of the writer. A writer creates that which is unspoken. Excellent 3-5-3 form and use of words.
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You have a vivid use of words for a short poem. Your last line which is one word "unspoken", captures the life of the writer. A writer creates that which is unspoken. Excellent 3-5-3 form and use of words.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
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thank you mermaid 😎
Comment from Janet Foor
A thought provoking piece in just a few well chosen words. I think these short poem forms are difficult to accomplish and still make sense. You have made it look easy.
Blessings
Janet
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A thought provoking piece in just a few well chosen words. I think these short poem forms are difficult to accomplish and still make sense. You have made it look easy.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
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thank you janet 😎