Evermore
There is no escaping her fire.10 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Wonderful entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your read and encouraging review.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Excellent.
I voted for your poem in the contest.
Love it!
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Excellent.
I voted for your poem in the contest.
Love it!
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your read and your vote. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sugarray77
Great job on your verse for the 3-5-3 prompt. I like this verse and the beautiful artwork you included. Your short poem really shares your passion with us. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Great job on your verse for the 3-5-3 prompt. I like this verse and the beautiful artwork you included. Your short poem really shares your passion with us. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your read and encouraging review.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Eleven words used to great effect. Passion, as a fire that won't ever extinguish is how it should feel. Very romantic and what we can hope to feel at least once in our life. Happy New Year!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Eleven words used to great effect. Passion, as a fire that won't ever extinguish is how it should feel. Very romantic and what we can hope to feel at least once in our life. Happy New Year!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from jessizero
I tried to review earlier, but I don't think it worked, so I apologize if it goes through twice.
I love your poem on passion. I don't want to be too punny, but it was hot. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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I tried to review earlier, but I don't think it worked, so I apologize if it goes through twice.
I love your poem on passion. I don't want to be too punny, but it was hot. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the read and the honor of six stars. I like it when hot is a good thing.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A neatly expressed idea which meets the demands of the form! Very appropriate picture which suits the text perfectly. It is surprising how a few well chosen words can say so much!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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A neatly expressed idea which meets the demands of the form! Very appropriate picture which suits the text perfectly. It is surprising how a few well chosen words can say so much!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a 3-5-3 Writing prompt entry based on Passion.
A writers passion was the previous prompt entry.
Both well written anf thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This is a 3-5-3 Writing prompt entry based on Passion.
A writers passion was the previous prompt entry.
Both well written anf thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
Comment from Jim Wile
Almost a perfect poem. I think you probably mean either "She is fire" or "She's as fire, but not "She's is fire."
Everything about it is visually beautiful. Make the change before the voting begins.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Almost a perfect poem. I think you probably mean either "She is fire" or "She's as fire, but not "She's is fire."
Everything about it is visually beautiful. Make the change before the voting begins.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the catch. I have corrected it. Much appreciated.
Comment from Celyn
This is a good poem that shows the effects of passion well. It has the required number of syllables per line and reads well.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This is a good poem that shows the effects of passion well. It has the required number of syllables per line and reads well.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the read and the feedback.
Comment from Kaiku
This is a very strong entry into the contest. The graphic is exceptional and the words follow suit. Well done, you just made me put my pen down. Good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This is a very strong entry into the contest. The graphic is exceptional and the words follow suit. Well done, you just made me put my pen down. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the read and the six star honor.
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