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Pure Joy

A lune for the contest

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mark D. R.
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June,

I too like this poem format! Yes, many possibilities exist if you keep your mind open to new ideas, including writing poetry for FS reviewers. LOL

Mark

P.S. Still think you should increase your font size for your FS posts, especially those with short poem formats.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    I?m glad you enjoyed this short one with a simple message of positivity. Sometimes we miss the beauty that?s right in front of us. Thanks for dropping by to share your insights. And I did enlarge the font?
reply by Mark D. R. on 27-Dec-2022
    June,

    Good for you! Best wishes for a happy, healthy New
    Year!

    Mark
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi June,
What a great mixture of words and artwork. This short poem gives great advice which we all should follow.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    I?m glad you enjoyed this short one with a simple message of positivity. Sometimes we miss the beauty that?s right in front of us. Thanks for dropping by to share your insights.
reply by dragonpoet on 27-Dec-2022
    No problem, June. Sadly, it happens much to often.
    Joan
Comment from Sugarray77
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How adorable is the verse along with the enhancing artwork. You have done a really good job in crafting this one and the last line being a stand alone statement adds punch and depth... with eyes wide open... so enchanting. Well done and good luck, June.

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    I?m glad you enjoyed this short one with a simple message of positivity. Sometimes we miss the beauty that?s right in front of us. Thanks for dropping by to share your insights.