Two Old Coots
a 100 word story34 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
I have an aging cat with a heart murmur so I can connect to this. Top notch writing skills in this ff about a man whose only friend seems to be his lifelong four footed companion.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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I have an aging cat with a heart murmur so I can connect to this. Top notch writing skills in this ff about a man whose only friend seems to be his lifelong four footed companion.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2023
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Spitfire, I am honored and thrilled by your response to my story. Many thanks also for the six-star bonus. Rod
Comment from tempeste
Ciao,
this packed a punch .. seeing my pets get old always hurt.. now I'm ageing and can see the ailments they went through.
Hopefully, old Abner and his owner pass together.
Often when an elderly owner passes ,their pets, young or old, are brought to shelters. The more headless will just dumped them on some far way street.
If the owner is left behind, his/her life becomes more lonely. Today most elderly people are forgotten... the younger generations don't care nor show respect towards them. A society that does not see the value in the wisdom of our elders, is a dying society.
Sorry for the rant ...
Your narrative stirred up lots of sad emotions.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Ciao,
this packed a punch .. seeing my pets get old always hurt.. now I'm ageing and can see the ailments they went through.
Hopefully, old Abner and his owner pass together.
Often when an elderly owner passes ,their pets, young or old, are brought to shelters. The more headless will just dumped them on some far way street.
If the owner is left behind, his/her life becomes more lonely. Today most elderly people are forgotten... the younger generations don't care nor show respect towards them. A society that does not see the value in the wisdom of our elders, is a dying society.
Sorry for the rant ...
Your narrative stirred up lots of sad emotions.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I am sorry my story stirred up lots of sad emotions, tempeste, but I truly appreciate your praise and those six bright stars. Rod
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All good ..a well penned poem should touch us emotionally, that's why I gave it a six star review after-all!
Take care and
Buon Anno / Happy New Year!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Rod,
Well done on your story. It's a no win situation. If you go first, someone has to deal with the dog, and of course he'll be distressed. If he goes before you, the pain might be unbearable. I can't have another dog. The loss is greater than I can stand. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Hello Rod,
Well done on your story. It's a no win situation. If you go first, someone has to deal with the dog, and of course he'll be distressed. If he goes before you, the pain might be unbearable. I can't have another dog. The loss is greater than I can stand. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Tom, you are correct on both accounts. Many thanks for sharing my story. Rod
Comment from Douglas Goff
Ah a curse as old as time itself, aging, raging, then turning to dust. Sad. I beat the game. Got vampires in 1833 by a London prostitute and never looked back.
Of course I'm a blood sucking night fiend with no soul but at least I don't have to worry about aches and pains.
Thanks for sharing this well-written piece.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Ah a curse as old as time itself, aging, raging, then turning to dust. Sad. I beat the game. Got vampires in 1833 by a London prostitute and never looked back.
Of course I'm a blood sucking night fiend with no soul but at least I don't have to worry about aches and pains.
Thanks for sharing this well-written piece.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Glad you enjoyed my story, Doug.
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I did!
Comment from Danielle H. Lacefield
Excellent voice and expression. I could easily imagine my grandparents and their dogs while reading this. The dialect (shoulda, 'ritis, etc.) made it a little difficult at first to read, but once I got used it it, it added a lot to the story.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Excellent voice and expression. I could easily imagine my grandparents and their dogs while reading this. The dialect (shoulda, 'ritis, etc.) made it a little difficult at first to read, but once I got used it it, it added a lot to the story.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, Danielle, for sharing and praising my story. I am especially pleased you struggled through the dialect and found it added to the story. Rod
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love this story and can relate to it. I'm seventy-six, and my dog is twelve. It what they say about dog years is true; she is older than me now. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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I love this story and can relate to it. I'm seventy-six, and my dog is twelve. It what they say about dog years is true; she is older than me now. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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I have heard from others on site who can relate (painfully) to my story. I am so pleased you love it nevertheless. Rod
Comment from irishauthorme
Ha, grim humor! It is sad to grow old, and worse to watch a beloved partner and companion grow old a feeble.
I can relate to your story.
Some family pets are almost like family. We lost our 20-year-old cat and our young German Shepherd in the same month.
Good work,
irish
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Ha, grim humor! It is sad to grow old, and worse to watch a beloved partner and companion grow old a feeble.
I can relate to your story.
Some family pets are almost like family. We lost our 20-year-old cat and our young German Shepherd in the same month.
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Hi, Irish. Indeed it is uncomfortable to watch a beloved pet grow old. Thank you so much for sharing your story. My condolances for your cat and dog. Rod
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent work... I voted for it.... This is a well written story that flows with relatable themes and reasoning. Well done on crafting a lovely short Flash that is endearing.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Excellent work... I voted for it.... This is a well written story that flows with relatable themes and reasoning. Well done on crafting a lovely short Flash that is endearing.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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It?s music to my ears to hear my story is "endearing," Melissa. Thank you so much for your praise and your vote. Rod
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great entry for the 100 words contest. It's bittersweet to grow old, and this presented as a lonely but happy encounter of an old man with his aging friend. Enjoyable! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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This is a great entry for the 100 words contest. It's bittersweet to grow old, and this presented as a lonely but happy encounter of an old man with his aging friend. Enjoyable! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Your word for aging?"bittersweet"?says it all. I am so pleased you enjoyed my story, John, and truly appreciate your praise. Rod
Comment from mermaids
Excellent dialog and a feeling of sadness comes through in this tale of an elderly man and his senior dog. Your use of words make the story real and I am sure there are many canine and human stories like this that are true.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Excellent dialog and a feeling of sadness comes through in this tale of an elderly man and his senior dog. Your use of words make the story real and I am sure there are many canine and human stories like this that are true.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, mermaids, for your high praise of my story. Sadly, many other reviewers have told me the Narrator could be them. Rod
