Without Faith
It is impossible to please God16 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your words remind me of how often we gallop away from God. Your words of faith are clear and remind the reader to pray and remain faithful. Excellent faith based poem.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Your words remind me of how often we gallop away from God. Your words of faith are clear and remind the reader to pray and remain faithful. Excellent faith based poem.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Hello Mrs. Fish! Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. So many have galloped away because they have lost faith in what they can't see. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Sugarray77
Good morning, Kay. Great job on executing and crafting an exemplary Loop poem for the Faith contest. I enjoyed reading your 'galloping' poem with your affirmation of faith. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Good morning, Kay. Great job on executing and crafting an exemplary Loop poem for the Faith contest. I enjoyed reading your 'galloping' poem with your affirmation of faith. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Hello Melissa, Many thanks for your kind words. So many have turned away from Him and now, this is the testing time in dark waters. Happy Christmas my friend. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Wendy G
Wonderful poem of faith! Yes many are galloping away from Him, when it would be so simple to come towards Him and meet their Creator before it's too late. Best wishes for your entry in the contest. I hope your Christmas was very happy, and a meaningful time of celebration and reflection.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Wonderful poem of faith! Yes many are galloping away from Him, when it would be so simple to come towards Him and meet their Creator before it's too late. Best wishes for your entry in the contest. I hope your Christmas was very happy, and a meaningful time of celebration and reflection.
Wendy
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you Wendy. I went to the carols followed by the Mass. Fr. was dashing around in his Santa suit greeting all the children. The parishioners had made bottles, decorated on the outside and lighting up led lights inside - lovely. Benny and I just had a prawn lunch (yes he likes prawns) it is a sad/happy time for many. I miss my family. Hope you had a wonderful day my friend. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Faith poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words that are so very true. It is impossible to please God without faith! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This is a very well written Faith poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words that are so very true. It is impossible to please God without faith! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Hello Teri, Thanks so much for kind review. I went to church Christmas Eve and Santa was giving gifts to the congregation. Then he changed into his special robes for the Mass - it was the Priest! Hope your day was special. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Karyn2
Aussie this is such a terrific poem and so clever in it's construction with use of repetition at beginning and end of lines. Each line creates a place to ponder and question. A really fine poem which expresses faith and the way faith can change us. I enjoyed the wild horses imagery at the start too! I wondered whether the final two lines of 3rd stanza could incorporate the wonderful use of repetition that each other pair contained? A wonderful poem for the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Aussie this is such a terrific poem and so clever in it's construction with use of repetition at beginning and end of lines. Each line creates a place to ponder and question. A really fine poem which expresses faith and the way faith can change us. I enjoyed the wild horses imagery at the start too! I wondered whether the final two lines of 3rd stanza could incorporate the wonderful use of repetition that each other pair contained? A wonderful poem for the contest!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Hello Karyn. I guess you are enjoying Christmas Day. We are a day in front of you. Thanks for reading my friend. Best wishes, thanks for reading. Love Kay xx
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely reflection about faith and the call of God to stop "galloping" way but keep close to Him and wait on Him. May all our loved ones who have been galloping away turn back to Him!
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Lovely reflection about faith and the call of God to stop "galloping" way but keep close to Him and wait on Him. May all our loved ones who have been galloping away turn back to Him!
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Lena, Thanks for the Highest Blessings Horses! Glad you liked my poem. I guess you are enjoying Christmas Day, we are a day in front of you. Blessings, Kay xx
