Without Faith
It is impossible to please God16 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Kay,
This is a well done loop poem that simple states our call to go to church and worship and to pray anywhere for everyone. It reminds us we need a time to be quiet with ourselves and our God.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Hi Kay,
This is a well done loop poem that simple states our call to go to church and worship and to pray anywhere for everyone. It reminds us we need a time to be quiet with ourselves and our God.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Hello Joan, Thanks for the congrats and glad you liked my Loop poem. Blessings, Kay xx
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You're welcome on both accounts, Kay.
Joan
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Yes, my garden is my cathedral. A quiet place with the Lord until the birds start chattering!
Comment from susand3022
A nice Faith Poem. I've seen many of them today, the contest must be closing soon. I can't seem to write it unless it really strikes me. I suppose I'm just not the preacher type. I had one in my family a few generations ago, a circuit preacher. I guess it's just not in my blood.
Good luck in the contest!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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A nice Faith Poem. I've seen many of them today, the contest must be closing soon. I can't seem to write it unless it really strikes me. I suppose I'm just not the preacher type. I had one in my family a few generations ago, a circuit preacher. I guess it's just not in my blood.
Good luck in the contest!
Susan :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Susan, you don't have to be religious; faith is the evidence of things not yet seen. Bible. Write about what you believe in spiritually. Love, Kay.
Comment from JT traveller
You clearly have strong faith. That is good. Great use of rhythm and flow. To have faith in anything, even other humans requires a great deal of sacrifice and trust.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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You clearly have strong faith. That is good. Great use of rhythm and flow. To have faith in anything, even other humans requires a great deal of sacrifice and trust.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you friend. Yes, my faith is strong and if we follow His words nothing can go wrong. Underneath are the Everlasting Arms. K xx
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Have a blessed day.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
It's beyond me how people live without faith, Aussie.
You did a great job with your faith contest entry. I
always enjoy your loop poems as that seems to be you
signature style. Your repeated word in each line after the
first fit in seamlessly. Your story was filled with great
imagery. Yes, it's sad to see people turning away from our
Creator rather than running toward Him.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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It's beyond me how people live without faith, Aussie.
You did a great job with your faith contest entry. I
always enjoy your loop poems as that seems to be you
signature style. Your repeated word in each line after the
first fit in seamlessly. Your story was filled with great
imagery. Yes, it's sad to see people turning away from our
Creator rather than running toward Him.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Happy New Year Jan. Thanks for reading; think I'm hooked on Loop poetry. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Sanku
It is true .There is only one God.And today many are moving away from God.
Your faith poetry was very interesting .These days you seem to write in the same form , I think it is 'cascade'
Wish you and your family a very happy New year.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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It is true .There is only one God.And today many are moving away from God.
Your faith poetry was very interesting .These days you seem to write in the same form , I think it is 'cascade'
Wish you and your family a very happy New year.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Hello Sanku, The form of poetry is called Loop. Thanks for reading. Wishing you a Happy New Year.
Love from Kay xx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, Amen my wonderful friend...
there is only one God...He asks us to
have faith in Him...love Him...and trust
in Him...live by His words...for this He
loves us like know other...promises eternal life...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...
very well written...Good Luck in the Faith contest...
love much...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Hi Kace, Amen my wonderful friend...
there is only one God...He asks us to
have faith in Him...love Him...and trust
in Him...live by His words...for this He
loves us like know other...promises eternal life...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...
very well written...Good Luck in the Faith contest...
love much...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Hello Shorty, Thanks for reading my friend. Glad you enjoyed. Your blizzard is moving on; they say their will be more bodies once the snow melts. Happy New Year my friend. Love, Kace xx
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my son said it was bad by him...you couldn't
go out for more than a couple minutes...and
uncovered skin froze...I feel so sorry for those who lost their lives to this storm...
you my friend...are always sooooo welcome...
and you and Benny have A Happy New Year...love much...xxoo 🎉🎈🙏😊💗🌼🧨🎇
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely faith poem working with a difficult poetic form. You are right that people tend to wander off and forget the quiet arrival of the King of Kings and the Lord of Lords.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This is a lovely faith poem working with a difficult poetic form. You are right that people tend to wander off and forget the quiet arrival of the King of Kings and the Lord of Lords.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Hello Carol, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Happy New Year from Australia! Kay xx
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Beautiful use of the anadiplosis ( chain verse), where the recurring words strengthens the poem like a backbone. Beautiful also the idea of ow faith saves us In desperate situations.
Very well written
Mario
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Beautiful use of the anadiplosis ( chain verse), where the recurring words strengthens the poem like a backbone. Beautiful also the idea of ow faith saves us In desperate situations.
Very well written
Mario
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Hello Mario, Happy Christmas. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed my Loop poem. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A well written poem of faith.
The chosen style adds depth and power to the chosen words.
The image suits the topic and the overall presentation is pleasing.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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A well written poem of faith.
The chosen style adds depth and power to the chosen words.
The image suits the topic and the overall presentation is pleasing.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you Shirley. Glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay.
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You're welcome.
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Happy New Year Shirley. Kay xx
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Kay. I really appreciated the picture and your words were delightful, they showed simply that there was only One God. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Kay. I really appreciated the picture and your words were delightful, they showed simply that there was only One God. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Hello Alie, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Happy Christmas love Kay xx
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You are most welcome, Kay, love Alie.
