Arise, Arise
A sliced shirt ok. But no breast fillet.47 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
A good effort but it did not evoke real horror for me. Good effort to make it rhyme but I feel it could do with a little more oomph. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
   |
A good effort but it did not evoke real horror for me. Good effort to make it rhyme but I feel it could do with a little more oomph. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Horror writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
I like the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
|
Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Horror writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
I like the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
This poem is both funny and terrible. It tells a story in very few words and was fun to read. A picture would have made the writing even more interesting, but it is fine as it is. Best of luck in the contest.
|
This poem is both funny and terrible. It tells a story in very few words and was fun to read. A picture would have made the writing even more interesting, but it is fine as it is. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, A Horror Alert, has the proper formatting, rhymes, and has us find, along with the speaker, that crazed slashers seldom only cut up shirts. Welcome to victimhood.
|
This 5-7-5, A Horror Alert, has the proper formatting, rhymes, and has us find, along with the speaker, that crazed slashers seldom only cut up shirts. Welcome to victimhood.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
Comment from royowen
I must agree, but being a male, I don't really have much of a breast to slice, but nicking my shirt with a blade is OK as long as it's not a good one, beautifully and amusingly written, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
|
I must agree, but being a male, I don't really have much of a breast to slice, but nicking my shirt with a blade is OK as long as it's not a good one, beautifully and amusingly written, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
Comment from Douglas Goff
This 575 Horror Haiku contest entry looks solid tome!
You left a lot to the imagination, which is a must with so few syllables allowed.
Nice work.
|
This 575 Horror Haiku contest entry looks solid tome!
You left a lot to the imagination, which is a must with so few syllables allowed.
Nice work.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
"A Horror Alert" this is a
5-7-5 poem about Horror, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing and have a Blessed Christmas.
Doctor Ricky 1024
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
"A Horror Alert" this is a
5-7-5 poem about Horror, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing and have a Blessed Christmas.
Doctor Ricky 1024
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
