Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Good morning! I enjoyed reading your 60 Word Dash entry. It is creatively written with a good theme and delivery. Well done on all points. I wish you luck in the contest!

Melissa

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

LOL, I did have to think about it for a second or two. And then it hit me. You have a great sense of humor, and it shows in the entry. I think it could do well in this contest. Good luck. Terry.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022

Thank you so much for this great review. Gretchen

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done with this, of course it was an ass that carried the pregnant mother of the Christ child, a great entry in this contest. It's hard to make few words count, but you've done well, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks!

reply by royowen on 23-Dec-2022

Welcome

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

TSk-tsk. Shame on you. Teasing me as you have. As your punishment I will keep my thoughts to myself as to exactly what I was thinking. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022

Thanks!

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

Nice job. Reeled the reader in and then set the hook. It is almost in the running for a dad joke. The flow is good. The language fits the situation. The misdirection works well.

Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022

Thanks!

reply by dellsworthpoet on 22-Dec-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm, so this is written through the eyes of an ass or a donkey. One that is in prime condition and liked by all who sees it.

This is an interesting play on words, with a slight subterfuge. I think there are many who enjoy this playful flash.

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022

Thanks!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 60 Word Dash Contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry and have a Blessed Christmas.
Doctor Ricky 1024

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022

Thanks!