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Comment from Ricky1024
Once wrote a memorial Entitled, "Forget Me Not"
She had committed suicide after the death of her son Christopher from an apparent suicide overdose.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Once wrote a memorial Entitled, "Forget Me Not"
She had committed suicide after the death of her son Christopher from an apparent suicide overdose.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy happy Holidays!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Forget me not where a princess's flower grows (princess Diana's flower). She did have hardships but was always so graceful. Like your poem.
When I look at the image and see these gorgeous flowers, it makes me think of spring. We are having hardships of weather (worst in a decade), this December. I'm sure the roads are bringing hardship because of dangerous driving conditions.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Forget me not where a princess's flower grows (princess Diana's flower). She did have hardships but was always so graceful. Like your poem.
When I look at the image and see these gorgeous flowers, it makes me think of spring. We are having hardships of weather (worst in a decade), this December. I'm sure the roads are bringing hardship because of dangerous driving conditions.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Senryu poem- good picture presentation- good connection between lines- poem seems to be referring to a time in life where crossroads where countered - where choices were made- causing deep scars - still alive in the subconscious- unable to forget- good job
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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I like your Senryu poem- good picture presentation- good connection between lines- poem seems to be referring to a time in life where crossroads where countered - where choices were made- causing deep scars - still alive in the subconscious- unable to forget- good job
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from aryr
The picture was fantastic and the senryu was so delightful, Gypsy. I originally thought it was my imagination regarding the tree and the field of forget me nots. But it wasn't! I definitely saw the scars. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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The picture was fantastic and the senryu was so delightful, Gypsy. I originally thought it was my imagination regarding the tree and the field of forget me nots. But it wasn't! I definitely saw the scars. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs
Gypsy Sensei
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Opening old wounds can be dangerous. I think one is better off not going there. Hopefully they learned from it when it first happened. Your poem and the artwork are perfect together. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Opening old wounds can be dangerous. I think one is better off not going there. Hopefully they learned from it when it first happened. Your poem and the artwork are perfect together. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Comment from royowen
Some old memories can be very painful, the can gnaw at the heart of one's resentment, it takes a lot of effort to overcome ill feeling, it takes much resolve and courage. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Some old memories can be very painful, the can gnaw at the heart of one's resentment, it takes a lot of effort to overcome ill feeling, it takes much resolve and courage. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write as we remember the bad times and know we cannot change them. It is best to move on and leave these memories behind and make new ones, a poignant Senryu, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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A poignant write as we remember the bad times and know we cannot change them. It is best to move on and leave these memories behind and make new ones, a poignant Senryu, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy Holidays!
Gypsy hugs
Sensei Word Weaver
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poetry, and the images you add to them, are spectacular. This one is not a disappointment. I found it beautiful, and the words were well chosen. I enjoyed reading this lovely poem.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Your poetry, and the images you add to them, are spectacular. This one is not a disappointment. I found it beautiful, and the words were well chosen. I enjoyed reading this lovely poem.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy Holidays!
Gypsy hugs
Sensei Word Weaver
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery paints a good word picture
of the roads and fields of flowers.
-A good satori line.
-You do a good job showing the
contrast of the forget-me-nots
and the painful memories.
-The flower you chose adds to the feeling of pain.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery paints a good word picture
of the roads and fields of flowers.
-A good satori line.
-You do a good job showing the
contrast of the forget-me-nots
and the painful memories.
-The flower you chose adds to the feeling of pain.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy Holidays!
Gypsy hugs
Sensei Word Weaver
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You are very welcome, Gypsy. Happy Holidays to you, too.
Comment from nomi338
Going over past incidents, some happy, some sad, can be a very tricky experience. Opening old wounds can lead to incredibly painful scars. Can you survive the reinjury? Is it even worth the possibility?
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Going over past incidents, some happy, some sad, can be a very tricky experience. Opening old wounds can lead to incredibly painful scars. Can you survive the reinjury? Is it even worth the possibility?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy Holidays!
Gypsy hugs
Sensei Word Weaver