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Loneliness

Motionless

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Excellent
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This is a good 5-7-5 entry. The message is clearly stated. The text could be one size larger under the visual. It is dwarfed by the visual. The visual works perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
    I appreciate your kind words.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 21-Dec-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Excellent
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Striking and appropriate picture. Gives clearly a sense of floating without direction! This meets the rules for the competition with the correct syllable count!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
    Thank you so much.