Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Enter The Elves"A A new threat arises to the north.
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Comment from Dr. Von
This chapter has the feel of a battle strategy gone awry. There are well intention leaders who underestimate enemy strengths and overestimate field intelligence. Well-written. This continues to connect the changing terrain and combatants. Good work. I enjoyed reading,
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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This chapter has the feel of a battle strategy gone awry. There are well intention leaders who underestimate enemy strengths and overestimate field intelligence. Well-written. This continues to connect the changing terrain and combatants. Good work. I enjoyed reading,
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Sir!
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You are welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Again, your action and descriptions are excellent. The names of some of the elves and etc. didn't go unnoticed. Did I miss the dragons while reading? I sure hope not. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Again, your action and descriptions are excellent. The names of some of the elves and etc. didn't go unnoticed. Did I miss the dragons while reading? I sure hope not. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you, my friend! No 'that' issues this time!!!
Comment from Ricky1024
Dwarves Vs The Gonlins followed with the Elves.
Much fierce battling g especially the archers.
No Dragons this time but more than an enough bloodshed.
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Another wonderfully and wondrous disaster.
Rich in Theme and imagery.
Wondering what's going on next with these Elves and the Evil Magician from the previous chapters?
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Dwarves Vs The Gonlins followed with the Elves.
Much fierce battling g especially the archers.
No Dragons this time but more than an enough bloodshed.
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Another wonderfully and wondrous disaster.
Rich in Theme and imagery.
Wondering what's going on next with these Elves and the Evil Magician from the previous chapters?
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Fantasy is rich in monster fighting!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, a great deal of narration in these last chapters, more this one. Also, speaking of being outnumbered. There are an awful lot, seemingly endless amount of Goblins. That would require a great deal of support, food, water, and production of arms (arrows).
Good chapter.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Hmm, a great deal of narration in these last chapters, more this one. Also, speaking of being outnumbered. There are an awful lot, seemingly endless amount of Goblins. That would require a great deal of support, food, water, and production of arms (arrows).
Good chapter.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Sorry, fell behind with the holidays. Agreed. A few have pointed out too much narration in this chapter. Plus I need to reiterate the scavenger nature of goblins
