The Best Time of Ohmie's Life
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Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter is based on commandeering a Russian freighter and traveling towards the United States.
This was another well written piece rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Normal Synopsis: The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed week.
Doctor Ricky1024
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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This chapter is based on commandeering a Russian freighter and traveling towards the United States.
This was another well written piece rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Normal Synopsis: The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed week.
Doctor Ricky1024
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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Thank you.
