Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This nonet has a story and plenty of action. It seems the fly is in constant danger of being ensnared in a spider web. Favorite line "and feel its kiss." The spider web is soft like a kiss but impossible, nearly, to escape from. Great job!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, Crystie! The only thing I hate about walking in the woods is walking into an unseen spiderweb.

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet!

You now have 4 votes.

I love spider webs especially after a drizzle and raindrops look like pearls in the sunlight.

Great rhyme miss/ ( death) kiss, the poem flowed well.


I understand you had to finish with a one syllable word .. but in all honesty the spider has to eat and it does do us a service in eliminating flies.

I have seen butterflies trapped and that I found sad .

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Yes, such is the way of nature. Thank you for the great review.

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

It is amazing how well you were able to tell a story in a Nonet Poem and make it rhyme so well. Your syllable count is perfect, and your chosen artwork pairs perfectly, enhancing your message. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022

Thank you so much for the good review.

I hate walking into spider webs too,
But I don't usually expire, like flies do.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

The words rhymed and flowed, but the subject matter was decidedly dark. It had beautiful words, though. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022

Thank you for reading it and the good review!