The Best Time of Ohmie's Life
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Comment from karenina
Thank goodness you mention the whole code thing was explained in previous chapters! I was about to reenter third grade, because I was totally lost.
Ohmie is sure living every second of life he has left! This is not a young man who indulges in pity parties.
Can I help it if I'm still hoping for some miracle remission?
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank goodness you mention the whole code thing was explained in previous chapters! I was about to reenter third grade, because I was totally lost.
Ohmie is sure living every second of life he has left! This is not a young man who indulges in pity parties.
Can I help it if I'm still hoping for some miracle remission?
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your review.
All I can say is to 'hang on to your pants'.
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I have no choice!
Comment from Wendy G
A good read, as always. One very minor detail (reject if you want, it doesn't really matter) is that when on corticosteroids (as I am) and you need to increase or double (or treble) the dose, you generally take it in one big hit rather than take the same dose twice as often. Packs a bigger punch. An excellent read, and it was good to hear how he came to be diagnosed. Extreme tiredness is the first warning of a lot of serious illnesses. Good writing, Wayne.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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A good read, as always. One very minor detail (reject if you want, it doesn't really matter) is that when on corticosteroids (as I am) and you need to increase or double (or treble) the dose, you generally take it in one big hit rather than take the same dose twice as often. Packs a bigger punch. An excellent read, and it was good to hear how he came to be diagnosed. Extreme tiredness is the first warning of a lot of serious illnesses. Good writing, Wayne.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank you.
Good to know about the corticosteroids.
Comment from Susan Newell
Wayne,
This is another excellent chapter. I didn't find any FS Gremlin interjections. :-) I'm still surprised that you have been able to carry this story through so many chapters. I liked the reveal of how Ohmie's illness was discovered. It is so sad, though, to have no hope.
Sue
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Wayne,
This is another excellent chapter. I didn't find any FS Gremlin interjections. :-) I'm still surprised that you have been able to carry this story through so many chapters. I liked the reveal of how Ohmie's illness was discovered. It is so sad, though, to have no hope.
Sue
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thank you for a very nice review.
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Welcome, Wayne.
Comment from royowen
How fascinating to be in stage four lymphoma, to have two spy parents who are being perilously hunted by assassins, and who knows why they are constantly, but then 007 is always in trouble, but always miraculously squeezes out of it, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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How fascinating to be in stage four lymphoma, to have two spy parents who are being perilously hunted by assassins, and who knows why they are constantly, but then 007 is always in trouble, but always miraculously squeezes out of it, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your fun review.
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Well done
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
We have a yacht docked off a marina in St. Augustine that belongs to a Russian oligarch that you can have. You'd have to get past the security that surrounds it first.
Spies sure know how to get things, and then ride on them in class. I guess no one would suspect that they're on a Russian yacht.
Good chapter - more on mom and dad and Ohmie bonding.
See you next week:-)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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We have a yacht docked off a marina in St. Augustine that belongs to a Russian oligarch that you can have. You'd have to get past the security that surrounds it first.
Spies sure know how to get things, and then ride on them in class. I guess no one would suspect that they're on a Russian yacht.
Good chapter - more on mom and dad and Ohmie bonding.
See you next week:-)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you.
Yes! Yacht security can't be much!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great chapter again . I remember reviewing a couple of other chapters and the feel is still good. There is a consistency in the plot and storyline. I would have liked some 'heart churning ' emotions somewhere but maybe it is found in other chapters.
Great work!
Mario
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Great chapter again . I remember reviewing a couple of other chapters and the feel is still good. There is a consistency in the plot and storyline. I would have liked some 'heart churning ' emotions somewhere but maybe it is found in other chapters.
Great work!
Mario
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Yes. Sorry you missed the heart churns, but more is coming, unfortunately.
Thank you for the review.
Comment from Ricky1024
It seems like in this chapter at least with all the attempted assassinations are main character is doing much better until he's diagnosed with cancer.
So we'll have to keep on following on to see what's going to happen at the end of the road?
Well written again and thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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It seems like in this chapter at least with all the attempted assassinations are main character is doing much better until he's diagnosed with cancer.
So we'll have to keep on following on to see what's going to happen at the end of the road?
Well written again and thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 16-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you.
