Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I really felt the phrase "this broken heart still beats." Your poem practically aches. Thank you for continuing to share your poetry, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022

Thanks for reviewing.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Good

This one needs quite a bit of work.
Eye am nothing without you. - (I, not eye)
But with the My blood I now bleed. - I don't know what this means.
still toi much work. - (too)
Your intermittent capitalization is baffling.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022

What you doing is you're criticizing a major force in the writing Industries.
But thanks.
My Style especially something so deeply written for my son.
Yes, who's a organ donor but that of course is your choice Wayne Fowler.
Content not Grammar and the word "Eye?"
Is my choice and style.
Doctor Ricky1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir Here at Fanstory"

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I'm so sorry, tender man. I know the holidays are so painful for you. I am keeping you in my prayers, hoping this year gets a little easier. I appreciate your poem and the honest message for those who are hurting.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022

This is a hard one for me to write.
And, that's why I didn't print it in a notebook or on computer as I have done hundreds upon thousands of times in 20 years.
I just talked it into thr cell and the entire time.
I just cried and I think that's what's going on here.
This so special it's been getting six star reviews. I'm boosting it up to the first page.
Thanks Sally as always,
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Nice dedication to your son who you will never forget. Another writer on here wrote about the experience she had with her nephew being an organ donor and I told her about you. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022

Thanks again Earl.
This one made me cry the Write through.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I was able to feel your emotions come through in your poem. Missing a loved one is grueling especially during the Christmas season.

I hope God gives you strength and courage day in and out.

John

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022

Thanks John.
This one I cried the whole way through.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

You can feel the raw emotion and pain in this. It is almost a living and breathing entity, palpable and poignant.

I feel for you Ricky, but you are correct my friend. You are not done here yet. You are touching many people with your heart felt words. Including me, my friend.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022

Thanks Douglas.
This one I cried the whole way through.
Doctor Ricky1024

reply by Douglas Goff on 15-Dec-2022

Powerfully written my friend.