The Spanish Guitar
3-6-6 Modern Haiku5 total reviews
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku modern poem- good picture presentation- good word count and connection- entwining guitar strings with a summer night - clever- Good job AP
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I like your haiku modern poem- good picture presentation- good word count and connection- entwining guitar strings with a summer night - clever- Good job AP
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from aryr
I truly loved the picture of the Spanish guitar and the Spanish maid, Gypsy. I loved your words about the entwined strings and a sultry summer night. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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I truly loved the picture of the Spanish guitar and the Spanish maid, Gypsy. I loved your words about the entwined strings and a sultry summer night. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Blessed be and hugs. :)
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Ricky1024
Guitars are a Beautiful creation for those gifted enough.
Another nice wring with Beautiful artistry.
I got compliments too on my choices.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Guitars are a Beautiful creation for those gifted enough.
Another nice wring with Beautiful artistry.
I got compliments too on my choices.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from lyenochka
Loved the S-word alliteration and the sensations of romance with the sultry summer nights and the sounds of the guitar strings. The Spanish guitar is a passionate sound!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Loved the S-word alliteration and the sensations of romance with the sultry summer nights and the sounds of the guitar strings. The Spanish guitar is a passionate sound!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Yes, Spanish guitar has a soulful sound. Spanish Flamenco dancers are very passionate and emotional.
Thank you very much for your time and insightful reviews, you always get the meaning.
Love you,
Marival ❤️
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I can hear the guitar playing. Your poem triggered music in my brain. You are Spanish so you know the Spanish Guitar.
I like the last line a lot. You used alliteration and consonance.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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I can hear the guitar playing. Your poem triggered music in my brain. You are Spanish so you know the Spanish Guitar.
I like the last line a lot. You used alliteration and consonance.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy