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Lords Of The Glen

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A A new threat arises to the north.

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Comment from Ricky1024
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It was a lot of fierce battles going on this time and unfortunately all the mighty Kings and princes and Sons were being killed.
And in the very end of this chapter Daggart the Black Wizard made sure of it!
But my question is can dagger be defeated by High King Tronin the Dragon Slayer?
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    Thank you Sir! YOU are a blessing to me and a big support!
reply by Ricky1024 on 16-Dec-2022
Comment from Dr. Von
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a well-written chapter. You did an excellent job of writing context using the lineage of the throne and the history of the kings. The transition between mortals and magic is in a key spot. It is the attention to detail that continues to make the chapters solid works. Great work.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    What a wonderful review my friend! I appreciate your support.
reply by Dr. Von on 16-Dec-2022
    You are very welcome.
Comment from lancellot
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Well, that was certainly a gruesome ending for the poor king. Oh well this chapter was, like the others, filled with manly pride and heroics right down to the bitter end. Daggart, will return in the next book to complete his conquest.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    Thank you, my friend. I'm being told the book is a little grim. People like the good guys to win!
reply by lancellot on 15-Dec-2022
    They do, unless... they get to know, understand, and possibly empathize with the bad guy's motives, if not his actions.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
    Makes sense. Appreciate your wisdom.
Comment from prettybluebirds
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As you promised, I'm still waiting for this story to get better. The good guys are still losing the battle at this point. It's a nicely written story, just very sad.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
    What about the flaming butt picture that I cant get to stop uploading. Laughed so hard I cried.