Mrs. Claus on the Loose
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Comment from karenina
If I had fifty thousand stars extra, I'd give them here just for your syllabic structure for those words we're supposed to "HO-old!"
Such as:
"She told us what she wanted
a long-ong time ago,
But then I think that she forgot
An-and we-e must have too, so"
and
"She's making a fuss; she's ma-ad at us
T'was her dream car, and no-ow we are"
MUCH easier to sing along!
(Hey, go ahead and link up your favorite version of the original song! --Jan's posted a mini-tutorial on how to do it!)
(PS ~ I'm no Mrs. Claus, but I'd take a vintage MG if anybody has as n extra one!)
This was fun!
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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If I had fifty thousand stars extra, I'd give them here just for your syllabic structure for those words we're supposed to "HO-old!"
Such as:
"She told us what she wanted
a long-ong time ago,
But then I think that she forgot
An-and we-e must have too, so"
and
"She's making a fuss; she's ma-ad at us
T'was her dream car, and no-ow we are"
MUCH easier to sing along!
(Hey, go ahead and link up your favorite version of the original song! --Jan's posted a mini-tutorial on how to do it!)
(PS ~ I'm no Mrs. Claus, but I'd take a vintage MG if anybody has as n extra one!)
This was fun!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Thank you, ma'am! I appreciate that!!
I'm just gonna let the reader's brain hear the melody (like you did).
I'll look at her tutorial again, but I am the least tech friendly person there is.
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The results are in! I'm happy for the winners and still content that I got to try this and read all the awesome entries...
AND (If Santa's listening) I wouldn't turn done that MG!
Season's Greetings!
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they're probably in a car museum. :)
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Maybe I can get visitation???
:)
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worth a try. :)
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is a cute "song" about Mrs. Claus and her wish list - you would think the mister could conjure up anything she wanted, for heaven's sake!
I couldn't figure out which Christmas song you re-wrote. At first I thought it was "Santa Claus is Coming to Town" because of the "you better watch out," but I don't think that's it. You might want to mention what you're re-writing in your author's notes so that we can sing along:-)
Happy holidays!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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This is a cute "song" about Mrs. Claus and her wish list - you would think the mister could conjure up anything she wanted, for heaven's sake!
I couldn't figure out which Christmas song you re-wrote. At first I thought it was "Santa Claus is Coming to Town" because of the "you better watch out," but I don't think that's it. You might want to mention what you're re-writing in your author's notes so that we can sing along:-)
Happy holidays!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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it IS Santa Claus is coming to Town, and I sang it all the way through with my words.
but I'll mention the name at the bottom.
Comment from Bill Schott
This song cover of Santa Claus is Coming to Town, Mrs. Claus on the Loose, is a charming update to the Christmas classic which finds Mrs. Claus moving up to a Mersades and probably a younger Saint Nick.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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This song cover of Santa Claus is Coming to Town, Mrs. Claus on the Loose, is a charming update to the Christmas classic which finds Mrs. Claus moving up to a Mersades and probably a younger Saint Nick.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Oh, I think she loves old Santa - she's no spring chicken, herself, but she finally decided, if he could have a fancy, red sleigh, she wanted a fancy red something, too. Turn about. :)
Comment from jmdg1954
Your words to Santa Claus is Coming to Town appear to be spot on.
Well done.
Besides the syllable and bouncy accuracy, it told a good story.
I have not read any other entries, but this should be a contender in my opinion.
Best of luck.
Cheers, John
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Your words to Santa Claus is Coming to Town appear to be spot on.
Well done.
Besides the syllable and bouncy accuracy, it told a good story.
I have not read any other entries, but this should be a contender in my opinion.
Best of luck.
Cheers, John
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Many thanks, John. Much appreciated.
And cheers to you, too!